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Well Since I ran out of room the last topic, I decided to countinue it here , Ill Link to the last topic too

Chapters 1 - 28 (+ Joke, Directors cut, Writers note)
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... topic=9097

So heres the first chapter of part 2 !

The False City: Part 2

Chapter 29: Another Ambush!?
At the end of both the roads it led to the center of Kasumi Forest.
"There you are Cenon, I thought you got your ass Kicked" Soul says
"Naahh I was luring them into a trap"
Cenon has everyone on the left path tied up in a bag and so does Soul with everyone from the right path. From out of the shadows of the trees Haprish Appears.
"Goood Goood You both caught them all, Looks like I need to eliminate you both now" Haprish draws out both of his daggers.
"What is this Commander Haprish!?" Cenon says
"He's betraying us so he can control the army alone" Soul says
Cenon draws out both of his katana's from the earth and Soul pulls out a Trident. Then they both throw the bags behind the trees.
"Oh so you both think you can take me!?" Haprish shouts out.
"Shut up and die!" Cenon says
Cenon slams both of his swords together and a large, fast moving sound wave is shot out.
"SONIC BLASTER!"
Haprish uses his telepathy and creates a shield and weakens the sound wave a little bit.
"Not good enough Cenon"
Haprish moves quickly and slashes Cenon twice in the left arm. Soul then tosses his trident at Haprish and pierces through his right arm and part of his Torso. Soul then pulls back the chain attaches to the trident and brings in Haprish closer, Soul then swings down his Battle axe and slashes Haprish then draws out a Large sword and slashes upward, then he pushes him back and tosses 4 Throwing Axes at Haprish.
Haprish is pinned to a Tree and isn't moving.
"Holy Crap commander Soul..." Cenon says
Haprish's body then dissapears and he drops down from the trees and stabs Soul,But Soul's armor is too think to be pierced.
"Well well Even though you have heavy armor I can get through it.." Haprish says
Haprish then charges both of his daggers and they glow black. Cenon had enough time to charge up his attack and he charges at Haprish. Cenon slams down both of his swords in Haprish's Back, He then extends the string off the Hilt of the blades and says,"Darkness , Death, UNHOLY DEATH!"
Cenon then sends out a heavy surge of dark energy and pulls out both of his swords.
Haprish falls over and doesn't move for a moment. Soul then walks over and unsheathes his lance and raises it over Haprish. Then Soul slammed his lance down, but at the last miniute Haprish rolled over to the side and tosses both of his daggers at Soul and it goes right through his Armor and into his Torso.
"Urghhh....Lucky..Shot..Haprish..." Soul then kneels to the ground.
Haprish stumbles back up and his back bleeding and a Dark Flame burning on his wound.
"Your not gonna live for long with that wound Haprish" Cenon says.
"Thats what you think you damned winged demon."
Haprish then walks into a shadow and dissapears. Cenon looks around frantically with both of his Katanas out. Haprish then lunges out from the shadows behind him and stabs Cenon in the back. Out of reaction Cenon stabs both of his blades in Haprish's Stomach.
"Good reactions...you demon" Haprish says
"Die already you traitor" Cenon responded.
Haprish then falls to the ground, Cenon releases his Katana's back into the ground and Soul is still barely standing.
"Not bad Cenon... you could take his place as commander" Soul says
Cenon then lays on the ground and he says,"He's still not dead.. you have a lack of senseing things, But I can't move right now..go give him the finishing blow."
Soul then draws out his Battle axe and crawls over to Haprish.
"D...Die.." Soul says and he swings down his Battle Axe

End of Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Explosive Bags

Soul raises his battle axe but Haprish isn't there. Cenon looks around from what he can see while on the ground. A note is left where Haprish was and it reads
"You almost killed me but ill get you again, I swear it"
Soul shakes his fist but just falls over and rests. Meanwhile in the bags, Rax sets off a fuse for something.
"Uh Rax what is that?" Yasashiku asks
"Its a bomb..from my left over bomb arrow" Rax says
"OH Blarg" Lapsus says
The bomb explodes and the bag breaks into many little pieces. Lapsus, Lilium, and Yasashiku lay on the ground Knocked Out, Rax sites up and feels a little dazzed.
"Ok Shiro Electrocute the bag" Kiro says
Shiro sends a surge of electricity shocking everyone.
"Damn it ok, Lets try ripping the bag"
Everyone in the bag starts rolling around but nothing happens.
"EEK! Whose hand is it on my leg!?" Zoe says
"Ack Sorry" Kiro says
"Hold on lemme reach my Book of fire" Hiroki says
Hiroki squirms around in the bag and pulls out the book of fire and sets the bag Aflame.
"Ow ok im Medium Rare are you happy?" Kiro says

And now our teams have met up again in a battle worn area of the forest....something looms overahead

End of Chapter 30


Joke Chapter 6

Kiro: Freakin Midget
Shiro: Freakin Fatass
Kiro: Man who pee upwind has wetfeet , Man who pee downwind has wet friend
Shiro: I've been wasting your time since I was born
Kiro: Thats not new
Shiro: it is now

End of Joke Chapter 6

Chapter 31: The Fallen Knight

A Fallen Knight, Looking for repent and revenge for his honor.

The group hides behind a tree as Soul gets back up. Soul then pushes Cenon into a bush and looks up into the sky.
"Looks Like company..Won't this be fun.."
A Knight with 8 Dark wings decends from the sky holding a Spear and a Shield.
"Huh looks like the Fallen Knight of the Skies Sanctuary, If hes lookin for revenge he'll get it"
Kiro looks into the sky from behind the tree.
"Hey..Shiro..look its Krim the BlackSapphire" Kiro whispers
"Huh why isn't he guarding the Sanctuary?" Shiro whispers
"Hmm And apparently he looks diffrent too.."
"Everyone..stay hidden don't let them see you" Shiro says
Krim lands on the ground and holds himself into battle Positon.
"So.. your here to kill me for your loss huh?" Soul says
"Soul..It is time for you to be Purified"
"So it is huh?"
Soul pulls out his last Potion and drinks it, All of his wounds are healed.
"Do you really think you can take me on? After I destroyed your Sanctuary!" Soul yells.
Krim sprints forward and shouts out, "MIRROR SHIELD!", Soul whips out a spiked mace and a light energy force is reflected out from Krim hurting Soul.
"Grah..damn you and your shield of Aegis"
"You have no power you are a lost soul"
"Ill show you who has no power!" Suddenly Soul slams both of his fists into the ground an a dark aura surrounds him and hundreds of weapons with a dark aura sprouts out of the ground.
Soul sends out hundreds of chains from out of his armor and latches it on to all the weapons. Soul the raises both of his arms and he pulls out 2 Battle Axes with many of the other weapons. In response Krim slams his spear into the ground and then he says,"Die, Forest of Thorns..."
As soon as Soul raises all the weapons out of the ground hundreds of spears sprout out stabbing upward. Soul jumps up and swings his right arm and all the weapons attached to his right side is swung and the spears are broken. He then swings his left arm and all the weapons on the left arm is swung toward Krim. Krim crouches down and holds his shield in front of him. Hundreds of weapons begins clanging on krim's shield and bits of energy begins to strike Soul. Suddenly soul finds an opening and swings his other arm at Him. Krim tries to block the next arm but the left arm hits Him and knocks him back. Soul lands on the ground and all his weapons hit the ground also. Soul's dark aura begins regenerating his wounds slowly. Krim gets back up and tosses his shield at Him. Soul evades the shield and looks back at Krim.
"What a failed attempt." Soul says
Krim says "Genesis Dispel.."
The shield flies up into the air and begins fireing down the energy accumulated from Soul's Attack back at Him.
Soul raises both of his arms and begins spinning his arms trying to bounce away the rays of energy. The shield stops and falls back toward Krim, Then soul swings his arms toward the air and releases all the weapons.
"Rain of Death, The Souless Weapons!" Soul shouts out
Soul swings down both of his arms then all the weapons rain down on Krim.
A cloud of dust is raised after the attack.

End of Chapter 31

Joke Chapter 7
Kiro: I AM THE ALL MIGHTY HISTORY WRITER WHAT I WRITE IS SET IN 101010101's!
*Kiro looks around and doesn't see anyone
Kiro: whats the point of gloating if theres no one around to hear

End of Joke Chapter 7


Chapter 32: Crazy Heroics
The cloud of dust settles and Krim is nowhere to be seen. Soul looks around with both of his battle axes raised. A shadow moves along the ground quickly and a sword stabs Soul in the Right arm.
"GRaah! Shadow Step!?" Soul cries out.
"Begone Demon." Krim says
Soul's right arm goes numb and he drops his Battle axe. Soul swings the other battle axe at Krim. Krim blocks it with his shield and stabs Soul's left arm with his spear, Soul drops the battle axe. Soul being defenseless with only his armor protecting him starts to run away.
"I Won't let you run away from what you Did to us" Krim says
Cenon then rolls out from the bush and tosses both of his Katana's at Krim.
Krim blocks both of the Katana's and Cenon opens up a portal.
"Go Commander Soul!" Cenon says
Krim runs up and tries to Stab Cenon.
"Too slow"
Cenon sidesteps and runs into the portal and seals it. Krim's armor then starts glowing and the dark shade which overlooked him fades away.
Krim Sets his spear and shield on his back and walks over to the tree's where Everyone was hiding.
"Ah Lord Kiro and Lord Shiro, I have failed to protect the Sanctuary."
"Hey hey.. Kiro..whose this?" Rax asks
"This is The Avian Knight, Krim, He protects the sanctuary of the sky" Kiro explains
"So Krim..What are you doing down here on the ground?"
Krim sat down and started explaining.
"An army of demons..attacked the sanctuary, It was led by Haprish, one of the three commanders, Three quarters of the Militia was annhilated."
"Only I was left after they attacked again, I hid the artifact In the place the Prophet said where you would find it."
"I left the sanctuary using the warp at the basement, As I Exited through the bottem of the Sanctuary I sealed the bottem exit so they wouldn't find out."
"But, Before I came to the forest, A Duty, A revelation of my memories came back.. and I foresaw something."
Krim stood back up looking at all of them.
"I have to stop all of you from completeing your Journey." Krim said
"What..Journey?" Zoe asks
"I Guess you Do not Know, But I will have to Vanquish all of you right here and now."
Krim unsheathes his Spear and Shield and gets Into Battle Stance.
"I guess we have no choice you guys but to fight him"
"Ill take you all one on one, Two on one, or all at once your choice" Krim says
"Then Ill go first" Kiro says
Kiro pulls out a Lance and starts floating in the air.
"Air Elementalist Kiro ready for combat!"
"Hmm Hope your Sure Kiro" Shiro says
"Everyone back away now!" Kiro shouts out
Lapsus and Lilium runs over and hides behind a Boulder. Rax jumps up into a tree, Hiroki runs behind the tree, Yasashiku watches from behind a bush, Zoe climbs a tree and watches from above and Shiro draws out his dagger and fights with Kiro.
Kiro raises his hand and swings it down, A blade of air cutting the branches around Kiro Heads toward Krim. Krim then spins his spear around slams it down on the groun, A dome of dirt surrounds Krim blocking off the wind. Shiro runs up and stabs a hole in the dome, Creates an orb of blinding light and shoves it into the dome.
The dome Collapses and the orb dissapears , With Krim blinded by the light.
"Air and Lightning Combo!" Kiro Shouts out.
Kiro flies up into the air and fires a Pulse of Wind, Shiro jumps up and Electrifies the Pulse of wind. The wind slams down on Krim forcing him to the ground and electrocuting him.
Kiro lands on the ground, and looks at Krim. Krim gets back up and dusts himself off.
"I thought you could do a Little better Lord Kiro and Lord Shiro if you want to hurt me." Krim says.
Krim spins around his spear and says,"Gungnir, Heavens Wrath."
Krim runs up and strikes Kiro, He is then Hit by a Bolt of Lightning, Kiro falls backwards but is still up. Shiro then dissapears and a swirl of dust surrounds Krim.
"Hey Large Ass, Do you think you can get me? I AM electricity!" Shiro then starts running around slashing Krim all around. Krim isn't stunned in anyway and tries to strike Shiro, A Lucky hit gets Shiro but he seems to be moving faster with the boost of electricity. Shiro finds a Lucky spot and stabs Krim. He expresses no pain and Shiro kicks Krim in the back and backflips from there.

End of Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Air and Lightning

Kiro raises up his lance and jumps up high into the air and stabs downward toward Krim. Krim raises up his shield and blocks Kiro's attack, Shiro jets toward Krim and stabs him in the underarm. Krim jumps back and sheathes his spear and pulls out his legendary sword, Isabella.
"Looks like you won't have any mercy for me, I won't have any for you" Krim says
"Then go for it damn it" Shiro says
Krim's Sword begins glowing red and catches fire. Krim lunges forward at Shiro and says "Magnum Charge". Krim swings sword down. Shiro blocks it with his dagger but it shatters!
"What the hell!?" Shiro says
"Any weapon that comes into contact while my sword burns will be destroyed." Krim says.
Shiro draws out his dagger forged with the power of Electricity.
"Any weapon huh? I don't think it can break this one" Shiro says
Kiro watches from above gathering his energy. Krim lunges forward again and says,"Magnum Charge". Krim swings his sword down again and Shiro blocks it with his Electric Dagger. Shiro parry's his attack and stabs Him. Krim is electrocuted and shot backwards into a tree. Kiro begins glowing a bright green , he then holds out his lance and points it downward at Krim. Shiro pulls out a chain and a hook and tosses it around Krim. It latches Krim on the tree, and Shiro moves backwards and points his dagger at Krim. Shiro begins glowing a bright light, Kiro and Shiro both take aim.
"By the power of air!" Kiro shouts out
"The strength of electricity!" Shiro yells
"May both elements cause destruction on the oppressor!" They both yell out.
A Large beam swirling like a tornado is shot out toward Krim, and a Large bolt of electricity is shot out toward Krim. Krim breaks free at the last second and holds up his shield.
A blinding light engulfs the whole area.

End of chapter 33

Character Skills 1

This chapter is for the fun of it so. ill be adding more as the story goes along

Soul's Massive weaponry attack that is attached to him is called - Last Ditch Weapons


Soul's Weaponry Combination- Random Assualt
Lilium's Dark Energy attacks (listing)
Dark Energy Slam
Dark Force
Dark Aura

Hiroki's attacks (listing)
Book of Water
Book of Fire
Book of Earth
etc....
Entwining Roots
Treants
etc...
(its alot ok)

Rax's Attacks
Arrow Bomb
Random Creation
Heal Bomb
Forge
Snipe

Yasashiku's Attacks
Attack Form : Tai Chi
Attack Form : Qi Gong
Bo Staff Assualt
Bo Staff Fling
Flaming Staff
Flaming Earth
Explosive Air

Lapsus' Attacks
Omni Weapon use
Raging Slash
Chivalry
Demonic Rage
Resource Usage

Zoe's Attacks
Unleash the Angel
Angelic Attack
Holy Lance
Holy Guard
Health
Holy Defense
Hidden Powers

Kiro's Attacks
Hurricane
Tornado
Air Pulse
Air Blade
Air Assualt
Combo: Cousin Assualt

Shiro's Attacks
Lightning
Blind
Electromagnetics
Bolt Dash
Combo: Cousin Assualt

Soul's Attacks
Last Ditch Weapons
Random Assualt
Heavy Weapons
Medium Weapons
Light weapons

Krim's Attacks
Shield Reflect
Shield Combo
Magnum Charge
Holy Stab
Forest of Thorns

Cenon's Attacks
Ice Freeze
Aura Blast (Dark Aura at LVL 2)
Shield Barrier
Poison Cloud
Drain Life
Sword Charging
Sonic Blaster (Ranged one target)
Sonic Buster (around him)

Combos
Cousin Assualt - Both Kiro and Shiro begin Charging up their abilities , Kiro needs the most time with Shiro needing the least, Kiro fires a swirling beam that of a Tornado, Shiro fires a powerful bolt of lightning , when both meet at the target a bright and strong energy is released.

And thats it

Edit At last minute: these are known character attacks (heroes stil lhas some hidden ones)

Chapter 34: Sanctuary Raid
The Sanctuary of the Sky, Lord Kiro has dissappeared when he was about to be assassinated, now Haprish's army surrounds the sanctuary and Krim and his Guard await for the onslaught.
"SIR! WHERE IS LORD SHIRO!?" A Guard Asked
"I Belived Kiro summoned him down to where he is." Krim says
"Do you think we will survive this?" Another Guard asked
"We Will If you never lose hope." Krim responds
Haprish's army of winged demons circle's around the sanctuary. Haprish rides on a Large undead Dragon and shouts out,"MINIONS OF HELL, EAT THEIR FLESH AND DEFILE THAT TEMPLE!"
Krim holds up his shield and tells a guard to warn everyone to get ready.
"THIS WILL BE OUR FIRST RAID!"
Haprish calls out a command the army swoops down. Krim unleashes his wings of the archangels and 6 wings sprout from his back. Krim flies up into the air and feathers fall from behind him, demons are being sliced by the feathers. Krim draws out his Gungnir and spins it around. "Heavens Wrath" Krim says as he hooks his spear to his armor and tosses it. Bolts of electricity flies out from the sanctuary shocking demons that it touches.
"MASTER KRIM! DRAGONS ARE ASSUALTING FROM THE , GRAAAHGH!" A Guard cries out. The guards inside begins prepping the mages to activate the barrier. From holes inside the sanctuary Archers begin firing out holy arrows at the demons, Untill a dragons fiery breath burns the archers inside the ditches. Krim pulls his spear back and flies toward the dragon stabbing its wings. The dragon falls down to the earth.
Krim lands on the top of the sanctuary and says,"Guards, Cover me Ill end this now."
10 guards fly up from the sides and begins blocking attacks from Krim.
"Heavens power, Believe in us, Let no demon harm anyone, We are the protectors, we are the faithful, Evangelion." Krim says as a Golden aura engulfs him and his shout out around him vaporizing the Minor demons.
Haprish jumps off from the dragon and begins slashing at guards.
"twenty, twenty-one,twenty-two..what the..." Haprish is hit by the golden aura and is minorly burned.
"Damn thats half of our army, Kamikaze Demons get in there and blast away Krim and his Remaining guards!" Meanwhile Inside the mages finish their chant and a barrier forms around the sanctuary, Hundreds of explosions begins assualting the barrier, The Barrier then shatters and no Kamikaze Demons are left.
Haprish falls even more toward the sanctuary, as he decends he fires out fireballs at 4 of the guards. Krim is the last one standing against Haprish and the rest of the Demonic horde. Untill an elf warps In and starts slashing.
"Who are you?" Krim asks
"My name is Ziyu Copper, I won't let this place be destroyed!" Ziyu responds
"What..Lord Zi--"
"Shh" Ziyu thought
"Fine But this will be a betrayal" Haprish thought back.
"Demons back away now!" Ziyu shouts out
The demons withdraw for the time being and haprish warps away.
"They will be back, Tommorrow will be the last attack." Ziyu says.
Krim and Ziyu climbs down from the roof of the sanctuary and walks inside, Discussing future events.

End of chapter 34

Chapter 35: Poisoned Mind
"You shouldn't protect this sanctuary anymore" Ziyu says
"Why shouldn't I?" Krim said
"This place you can't protect it by yourself, Even with an Ally you can't. What you should do is get rid of Lord Kiro and his group"
"I can't get rid of Kiro he's the only one left of his kind." Krim says
"My ancestors thought they were the only ones left, But they weren't" Ziyu says
"You can fix everything and return to a normal Life if you eliminate them. You have the strength of 20 Men and 15 Mages, You could decimate armies and take down just about anyone. Kiro is your target you Will kill him" Ziyu says hypnotically.
Krim stares at him and falls over, Ziyu then says,"Yes..all is going just like the old man said it would, and now to complete history." Ziyu puts on a hood and opens a portal into the past and future, sending everyone who is fated to meet with Kiro,David and Hiroki into the present earlier than expected.
Krim awakens with the sound of footsteps running in the sanctuary.
"Where is Ziyu..Did he evacuate the sanctuary?" Krim says. Then Haprish runs into the main hall toward Krim. Krim tries to lift up his shield but can't. Haprish slashes Krim in the right arm, and then in the left leg before backing off.
"Aw so the Knight can't get up anymore?" Haprish said
"Your not my target get out of here" Krim said as his armor takes a darker shade.
"So you think your tough enough to kill me?" Haprish asked
Haprish dissapears and Krim frantically looks around with his Shield up.
"Surprise" Haprish said as he stabbed Krim in the back. Krim endures the pain and keeps standing and pulls out his Spear. Haprish then opens up a portal and grabs Krim, Then he Tosses Krim in the portal.
"Ok Ziyu now we got him to Eliminate Kiro for us, and Probably Soul too." Haprish thought
"Good, Im done here we will plan back at the base" Ziyu thought
Haprish dissapears into the shadows, The sanctuary is left unguarded and ogres and goblins were left inside to rampage and destroy it.

End of Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Origins 1, Yasashiku
A Boy lost from a Shaolin Temple, He is made of legends , made of myths, A hero.
"Its been so long that I have been lost from the temple, I don't remember how Long I've been gone." Yasashiku thought to himself. A Long time ago, Yasashiku was a young boy learning many martial arts techniques, His favorite weapon was a Bo-Staff, His proficiency and learning speed of the techniques was frightning. One day when the monks sent him off to hunt for food, A storm brewed and he was lost in the forest. Now we will see how he ended up into first getting into the city.
"Brr.. Its cold..As long as I have my staff and this Tarp then Ill be ok." Yasashiku says. He wanders the mountain forest looking for his way back to the temple.
"I don't think I will make it, I guess ill just find a good branch to sleep on." Yasashiku says
The rain countinues through the night but the water begins to rise, In the morning flood waters were almost high enough to touch Yasashiku.
"Whoa..Thats pretty high huh.. I guess I could get out of here."
Yasashiku jumps from tree to tree throughout the day till evening when the flood waters receded. A Cottage was ahead on a hilltop.
"Oh man a place to stay."
Yasashiku jumps down from the tree and swims toward the cottage and climbs onto the hill. Yasashiku gets up and shakes off any dripping water, he walks up to the door and knocks. The door falls over and its an abandoned cottage, Inside theres an old bed, an old table, a stove , a stool , and a Map on the table. Yasashiku walks inside and looks at the map. The map pinpoints to the Shaolin temple but he realizes hes very far away to even reach there anymore.
"Maybe I shouldn't go back.. maybe they don't worry about me, I could stay here." Yasashiku thought to himself.
For years Yasashiku stayed at the cottage, for many seasons he lived there. The strange map changed overtime, A city appeared on the map and the shaolin temple dissapeared, An arrow points to the city as Yasashiku looked over the map again after many years.
"Huh I don't remember this... Does this map want me to go there?"
Yasashiku gets his bostaff and packs up whatever he can and takes the map with him. For 3 months Yasashiku travels through the mountain toward the city. After a day in staying in the city he walks around outside and sees a bright light coming from the sky. Yasashiku runs toward the city park and watches from there.
A Lost boy growing up into a man, Developing his own skills and learning his own way.

End of chapter 36


Chapter 37: Origins 2, Kiro and Shiro
Two Cousins, Each with a unique ability , each the last of that element for their race, Diffrent but strong together, Nature's power.
Kiro flies around in the air looking for Shiro.
"Hey Lazy Ass!" Shiro shouts out
"HEY WHAT DID YOU SAY!?" Kiro yelled back
Shiro fires a bolt of lightning at him and says,"Tag you dumbass!"
"Hey damn it thats cheap using your lightning on me."
"Atleast Im not the one flying."
"Good point you midget." Kiro says
Kiro uses a gust of wind on Shiro and he flies up into the air.
"Tag!"
"Thats even more cheap than me using lightning on you."
"So?"
"Your a bastard"
Kiro ignores it and flies back toward the sanctuary.
Shiro jumps from cloud to cloud racing him back.
"Those two, lost their fellow clansmen in a demonic attack." Krim says
"Last ones of their kind, Last ones of their Ability, Two Cousins" The Prophet Says
"So Prophet what do you see instore for those two."
"I see..Destruction, fighting a Knight they know."
"I know it can't be me , Im the Guardian."
Krim walks back Into the sanctuary, The Prophet stands there looks at Kiro and Shiro racing toward the sanctuary.
"Hmm... Something is wrong with the air around here.. we need to get back fast." Kiro says
"Whatever Ill just follow you."
Kiro and Shiro race toward the sanctuary, the clouds darken around them and a flock of demons appear behind them.
"Damn it!" Kiro said
Shiro falls through one of the clouds.
"Bah Ill electrify myself back to the sanctuary, hurry up." Shiro says as he turns into electricity and jumps from cloud to cloud.
Kiro tries to get to the Sanctuary Quickly, But a demon caught up with him and claws him in the arm. Kiro turns around and lets loose a tornado and pauses the demons for a moment. The Prophet stands there and walks back inside the sanctuary, the doors are closed, Shiro enters the sanctuary and is sealed in a summoning jar.
"Im sorry Lord Shiro but its for your own good" The Prophet says
"What the hell old man let me out!"
"You won't be released untill Kiro releases you."
"Ill kill you next time we meet"
"There won't be a next time when you return."
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"You'll see with time"
The Prophet exits the entrance and into the main hall. Kiro flies into the sanctuary door.
"Crap! Open the door Shiro!"
"I can't Im stuck in this F**king Jar!"
"Hold On I know a summoning glyph!"
Kiro slams both of his hands on the door and a Glyph appears. At that moment a demon flies from behind and claws him in the back. Kiro turns around and lets loose an Air blade, The demon is sliced in half but two more appear. Kiro jumps off the Sanctuary platform downward toward the earth. Both of the demons chase after him, Kiro lets loose the Air Aura and begins glowing as he spirals downward. The Aura slices up the demons as Kiro falls. Kiro lands in a park in the city, landing on his head he is confused about where he is at and only remembers his name.
All heroes start somewhere, everything is linked by fate, no one is left behind, this is the revalation of the false book.

End of Chapter 37

Chapter 38: A Truce, The Army Rises
Three People all knowing each other fight, While the Army awaits for them to kill each other. This is the answer the false book of revelation will write.
The Light dies down, Both Krim , Shiro and Kiro are all still standing.
"Enough...*gasp* Do you feel that? Its another Demon army" Krim says while gasping for air.
"A Truce old friend?" Kiro suggests
"For now" Krim says
"Damn it and I thought we were actually gonna Kick Krim's ass" Shiro says
Everyone else comes out from their hiding spots and Yasashiku looks up and sees a floating building.
"Do you see that building up there? That is the Sanctuary" Kiro says
Hiroki flips through his books and finds information on the Sanctuary.
"*Ahem* ok It says here , The Sanctuary is hidden to normal human eyes , and will only be visible when it is about to fall." Hiroki says
"Wait what? Fall? Right there?" Rax says
"Yes It's going to fall.."
The Sanctuary tilts over slowly, but a flock of demons push it back up.
"What are they doing?" Lilium asks
"There is something of great importance inside but they can't get in without Kiro or Shiro present." Krim says
At the front of the Army Haprish rides on one of the dragons and looks down.
"Soul! Come out here now!" Haprish says while opening a portal.
Cenon appears pushing Soul out ontop of the dragon.
"Damn..Your all..going to kill me.." Soul says
"You never did treat me well So you deserve it" Cenon says
Soul rolls over laying on his back , both of his arms still immobile due to Krim's earlier attack.
"Your going to go down there and try to kill them all as you are now." Haprish says
"What the hell are you mad?"
"DO AS HE SAYS!" Cenon says while kicking Soul
"I Refuse to go down there and harm them."
"Then Die Soul you will never return again." Haprish holds his dagger to Soul's forehead, and stabs downward.
End of Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Burning with a Passion
A Master of Fire , A Master of the Ancient skills, The one who grew up alone, The false book of revelations section XXVI.
Yasashiku looks up into the sky at the demons as they swirl around above.
"Hold on you guys I can take em on." Yasashiku said
"Are you sure? Because we would help too" Zoe said
"Yeah yeah Im sure.. Just watch me."
A demon swoops down and tries to claw Yasashiku, He jumps up on the demon and jumps from the demon and sets the demon on fire. Another one swoops down and he pulls out his bo staff and slams it downward and pivots himself off from that one. He gets higher and higher and the first fleet of demons rush in toward him.
Suddenly a Yin - Yang Circle appears around Yasashiku, he holds out his palms and begins spinning around at a high rate. From out of his palms he shoots out small string for fire shoots out pierces through the demons. All the demons surrounding Yasashiku vaporize into thin air. He then begins falling to the ground, he then uses flames fireing out of his wrists to slow down his fall, when he reaches about 10 feet from the round he stops the flames and lands.
"See I told you I could do it." Yasashiku said
"Yeah but..one problem, That was only half of the first battalion of demons." Kiro said
Yasashiku looks up and finds more demons flying into the empty space which he just cleared out.
"Uh..Well well ok ...hold on give me a moment."
Yasashiku spins his bo-staff and sets a flame around it so its like a spinning disk.
He tosses it toward the demons and many of them are burned severely.
Yasashiku jumps up, stops the flame and catches his staff.
"Thats how we destroy demons where I'm from." Yasashiku says

End of Chapter 39


Chapter 40: Complete Combat 1
The might of just a few people can overcome an army , its all about heart, Exerpt from the false book of Revelations XXVII.
Lilium lashes out her chain at the ogres charging at her. One of them moves right past her and raises its club and swings it down.
"AIEEEE!!!!" Lilium cries out
Lapsus tackles the ogre out of the way and starts beating down on him rapidly.
"Oh..thank you Lapsus."
Lapsus knocks out the ogre and says," No Problem Lilium."
Hiroki opens up the book of water and a tidal wave floods out pushing back an army of goblins. Kiro and Shiro stand back to back and charging up their energy. Yasashiku stands right next to them building up energy. Rax stands accross from Yasashiku and starts firing arrows. Krim throws his spear into the ground and says,"Forest of thorns." Hundreds of spears spring up from the ground annhilating the mini devils. Kiro ,Shiro , and Yasashiku then holds out their weapons pointing into the air.
"The Elements have United" Kiro says
"Destruction is within the eyes of the enemy" Shiro says
"Now we will purify them." Yasashiku says
"TRI ELEMENTAL PURIFICATION!" All three of them shout out.
A Spiral of wind is shot out from Kiro's spear, a Lightning bolt is shot out from Shiro's Dagger, and a Pillar of Fire is shot out from Yasashiku's staff. All three of the elements unite together into a larger blast toward the army of flying demons, The Horde is vaporized completely.
Zoe flies around in the air in a One on One combat against Cenon.
"Why Won't you just leave us alone!?" Zoe says
"Because your destinies must not come to be!" Cenon shouts out
"Then why are you after the gem in my forehead!?"
"Your gem is the source of your powers, And its what I need for completetion!"
"Completetion?"
Cenon fires out a blast of cold air and says,"So I can become the most powerful being."
Zoe spins her lance in a circle and dispels the spell and says," Power isn't everything, its all about your heart!"
"What heart you stupid girl!"
Zoe and Cenon are gridlocked in combat, Zoe casts a Holy light spell and Cenon is shot backwards. Cenon regains control of his flight pattern and throws his katanas at Zoe. She then swings her lance down and deflects the Katanas, Zoe rushes in and stabs Cenon in the stomach.
"Urgh...Looks like you got me.." Cenon says as he falls toward the ground.
The only army remaining in the sky is Haprish and the dragon army, On the ground is more Ogres , Goblins, and Mini Devils.
Everyone stands by back to back keeping watch with 360 degree sight and Zoe watching the dragon army.

End of Chapter 40

Chapter ??: Im lazy and you can't do anything about it

Kiro: Thats right im just too lazy to do the second chapter for today
Reasons
A. Haprish complains alot
B. Im lazy
C. Im super lazy
D. You can last a day
E. I like even numbers

end of the lazy chapter

Chapter 41: Complete Combat End
The Battle will wage on till the sanctuary falls, Exerpt from the false book of Revelations XLI.
The Goblin Battalion rushes in toward Kiro and Shiro first. Kiro creates a wall of air and the front line goblins are shot high into the air. Shiro runs to the edge of the wall, holds out both of his hands and lets loose a bright light. The Goblins shudder and look backwards. Yasashiku sets the wall aflame and Kiro lets the wall fall crushing the Goblin Battalion.
"Damn devils..how do I beat a devil.." Hiroki whispered
"This is how you beat a devil!" Rax shouts out
The Mini devils charge in at Rax and Hiroki, Rax pulls out Fifteen Arrows and charge them up with a healing spell and aims it toward them.
Rax fires out the arrows and it pierces through half the mini devils.
"Whoa what was that Rax?"
"Healing Arrows, great stuff huh?"
With Rax's back turned a mini demon jumps out and shoots out a fireball. Hiroki jumps out and pulls out a book of fire opens it up and absorbs the fireball. He then slams both of his hands on the ground as he lands and hundreds of thorns is shot up from the ground stabbing the devils. Meanwhile Krim, Lapsus, And Lilium are fighting the ogres. Krim stands in front reflecting all the attacks from the ogres. Lapsus and Lilium both cover Krim's back. Lilium whips out her chain forward and wraps it around one of the ogres. She then jumps up ontop of Krim's Shoulders and swings the ogre around them knocking the rest down. Lapsus then takes the chain from Lilium and swings the ogre up into the sky. Krim slams his spear into the ground and hundreds of spears stab the ogres that are knocked down.
In the air Cenon falls into a tree unconscious and Zoe flies toward the dragons in the sky. Three Diffrent colored dragons, Green, Blue, and Red ones, shoot out their elemental blasts. Zoe spins her Lance around dispelling the Green winds, She then swings her Lance down knocking the Blue flame into the forest, Next she evaded the Red Flames and she began glowing.
"Oh Holy God, Give me strength so I can get through this!" Zoe Cries out
The Gemstone on her forehead begins glowing a bright Blue light. Her Angelic wings grow larger and she begins glowing a white aura. Zoe flies straight for Haprish letting loose a bright holy light at the them. The dragons are burnt to a crisp and fall toward the ground, Haprish defends himself from the holy light attack. Zoe then runs in and stabs Haprish in the arm. Haprish pulls out the lance and slashes Zoe in the leg and he begins to fall. Zoe points her lance at Haprish as he falls, Haprish begins incanting a spell. Zoe shouts out,"Holy Wrath!" and lets loose a bright ray of light. Haprish then dissapears and warps behind Zoe. Zoe turns around but not in Time for Haprish to stab her in the back and slash her wings. Zoe begins falling but fires another beam at Haprish. The beam moves quickly, but Haprish evades. The beam keeps going and fires through the sanctuary. Then the sanctuary begins a quick decent toward the ground.

End of Chapter 41
Chapter 42: Fallen Sanctuary
When the Sanctuary falls, the winds will stop except for the strength of an Elementeer, Exerpt from the false book of Revelations XLII.

The Sanctuary begins falling faster, Everyone starts running out of the way. Cenon gets up and starts flying into the air toward the sanctuary. Haprish opens up a portal and it exits to the ground. Cenon starts to try to smash down the door. The door begins to dent and crack. Zoe starts looking around frantically trying to figure out whats going on. Yasashiku grabs Hiroki and Rax and throws them behind a tree. Lapsus grabs Lilium and jumps into a tree. Kiro and Shiro begins glowing and they beam up into the sanctuary. At the door Cenon cracks the door even more and he breaks down the door.
"Finally! If I can get the power from this Sanctuary then I won't need to get that Angel's gemstone."
Kiro and Shiro appear in front of Cenon. They both hold out their hands and point it toward Cenon.
"Grah what do you think you both can do!?" Cenon says as he draws out both of his Katanas. Kiro releases a pulse of air and pushes Cenon back, Shiro lets loose a bright light blinding him. Cenon flies back and fires back a large pulse of sound. Kiro creates a patch of empty space(no air) and the sound stops there. Shiro lets loose a large thunderbolt shooting Cenon out of the sanctuary. Then the doors on the sanctuary shut. Kiro steps on the pedastal and he is dropped into a hole. Shiro puts his hands on the walls and a hidden pathway opens and he walks in. The sanctuary keeps falling and hits the ground. Parts of the sanctuary is in ruins but there is no sign of Kiro or Shiro.

End of Chapter 42

Chapter 43: The Sanctuary Door
When the book is found then destruction will befall ---, half page exerpt from the false book of Revelations XLIII.
Inside the sanctuary Kiro is sitting down in a meditative state. Shiro wanders outside the room Kiro is in as if he was guarding. Meanwhile Krim walks around the sanctuary looking for the door. Hiroki does a book count on what he has left, Rax begins healing anyone who is hurt, and Zoe is standing on a Pillar watching everyone. Lapsus and Lilium are sitting there talking to each other on what to do next. Yasashiku checks around for any remaining enemy troops. Krim finds the door, apparently its repaired and fixed completely. Krim places both of his hands on the door and tries to open it. The door doesn't budge and Yasashiku shows up.
"Can't get it open huh?" Yasashiku says
"Nope.. I used to beable to open it now I can't" Krim says
"Stand back oldman, I got it."
Yasashiku holds out both of his hands and lets loose large flames from his wrist.
The door doesn't melt or anything but something melted from the brick next to it.
Inside the hidden ditch is a book, On the front of it is called "The False Book".
Yasashiku opens up the book but he can't read a thing in it. Krim looks at it and he can't neither.
"Hmm what is this Krim?"
"I don't know..oh wait I know lets take it to Hiroki!"
Yasashiku takes a book and runs off into Hiroki's Direction, Then he tells Hiroki where they found the book and they can't read it. Hiroki picks up the book and looks at it, He pulls out another book and tries to translate it.
"Give me a day with this and I could probably translate the whole thing."
"Alright I'll get everyone else to help us open the door."
Krim rounds up everyone else and they walk up to the door.
"Hold on Let me give it a shot." Lilium says
Lilium pulls out her chain and charges it with a high amount of dark energy. She then lashes it out at the door. The door budges slightly.
"Hrmm How about a combination attack?" Yasashiku said
Lilium recharges her chain and Yasashiku charges up his palms, Both of them attack the door, it moves a little more. This time Lapsus and Rax tries with them. Lapsus punches the door, Rax fires a bomb arrow, Lilium lashes out her chain, and Yasashiku fires out a ray of fire. The door tilts and Krim tackles it knocking it down.
Inside it is dark...and nothing can be seen, even light doesn't pass through the entrance.

End of chapter 43

Chapter ??: My Excuse?
Uhhh... Explanation time

I had a test today, going to have one on thursday , and friday , Im braindead a bit too , and I have lost Ideas so if your going to complain COMPLAIN NOW!
So...heres a final word for today... Bwuh?

Chapter 44: A Sanctuary of Darkness
Chaos, This is what drives us for hope and power Exerpt from the false book of Revelations XXVIII.
Kiro sits there meditating as a strong gale gusts around him. Shiro stands by the entrance to the room glowing , as the only source of light to pierce the darkness in the sanctuary. Yasashiku lights a flame over his head and tries to walk inside the Sanctuary.
"Damn it, its too dark I don't think I can get through." Yasashiku says
"How is it your flame can't create enough light?" Krim says
"Its probably because this is not your 'ordinary' darkness."
"Humm.. how about I give it a try?" Zoe says
"Go for it Zoe I doubt you can do it." Rax says
Zoe walks up to the door and focuses the light around her, the gemstone on her forehead begins glowing and a bright light illuminates the main hall.
"Well looks like that did the trick, Even though I can already see in darkness." Lilium says.
"I could see into the darkness too." Lapsus says
They all venture inside with Lapsus and lilium looking at opposite ends of the halls looking inside. Everyone else follows Zoe and her bright light, the sanctuary door behind them shuts and there is no way out.
Shiro stops glowing and sees a bright light approaching and he waves his hand to Kiro and shuts the door. Shiro walks toward Zoe just staring out into blank space.
"Shiro! We are glad to see you!" Zoe says
"Yeah help us find Kiro too buddy" Lapsus says
Shiro says nothing and launches out a bolt of electricity, then Lilium whips out her chain and uses her dark force to shoot the electricity up to the ceiling.
"What are you doing Shiro!?" Lilium says
Shiro gets into his battle stance and gets ready to fight.
"Lilium since we both can see in the dark, we can beat him!" Lapsus says
"Yeah so, Everyone else please hurry and go find Kiro!" Lilium says
"Alright.. good luck you both." Krim says
Everyone else runs into the hallway next to them and the bright light dissapears.
Lilium and Lapsus begins their offensive on Shiro

End of Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Darkness Shattering
Shiro's lightning starts turning darker and darker, from a blinding light to a dull black.
The light in the room then fades to the point where its difficult to see. Lilium and Lapsus stand back to back looking around trying to pin point where Shiro is at. A bolt of dark lightning zaps Lapsus and he is shot back and pushes Lilium into a wall. Shiro's lightning fades again as he walks around slowly.
"Are you alright?" Lapsus says
"Yeah im ok but be quiet..." Lilium whispers
Lapsus picks Lilium back up on her feet and Lilium pulls out her chain again. Shiro moves runs to the side of them quietly. Lilium then charges up her Dark Aura which seems to be creating light.
"Oooooh" Lilium thought
Lilium then places both of her hands on the ground and releases her Dark Aura. The whole Sanctuary begins to fill with light. Shiro is seen standing right next to them with a Dark bolt in his hand. Lapsus lunges out and claws at Shiro's right arm. The Dark bolt in his hand dissipates into mid air.
"Why are you doing this Shiro!?" Lilium says
Shiro draws out his dagger and without a word attacks Lilium.
"NO I WON'T LET YOU DO THAT!" Lapsus cries out
Lapsus junges again at Shiro and pushes him out of Lilium's way. Shiro then shoots out electricity through his body and shocks Lapsus and they both fly into the opposing walls. Lilium then whips out her chain and hooks Shiro's neck and pulls it back. Shiro starts struggling and pulls out his dagger and he charges it with electricity, then he cuts the chain shocking Lilium at the same time. Both Lapsus and Lilium are knocked out and Shiro holds out both of his hands aiming his palms at them both. Shiro starts building up Two dark bolts in his hands and fires.

End of Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Darkness Shattering
An Two Arrows with Magnets attached to them is shot toward Shiro. Shiro evades the arrows but both of his lightning attacks became attracted toward the magnets and zapped it. Rax stands at the end of the hall way with his bow pointed at Shiro.
"They didn't need me since Hiroki was there, I thought there was something wrong." Rax said
Shiro changes his target to Rax and tosses his Dagger and him. Rax fires an arrow and deflects in mid air. Shiro uses this opportunity and lets loose a blinding light.
Rax covers his eyes and says,"Haha.. not this time I fell for it twice I won't fall for it three times."
Rax fires an arrow with a large piece of cloth on it. Shiro tries to blind Rax then but the cloth blocks it out. Rax then pulls out ten arrows and aims it at shiro and fires. All ten arrows go through the cloth and toward Shiro. As a counter attack Shiro creates an electrical barrier and blocks out eight of the arrows. One of them pierces Shiro's Right shoulder and the other pierces his right leg. Shiro pulls out the arrows from his shoulder and leg. At that moment Rax fires Three healing arrows at Shiro, Two of the arrows hit at the same spot the last two did and the third one misses. Soon the wound heals and the arrows are stuck in Shiro's flesh. Shiro's eyes stop glowing and he collapses.
"Damn, Im sorry Shiro but its for your own good" Rax says as he puts away the paralyzing powder.
Rax walks up to Lilium holds his hands over her and chants a healing spell. After he's done he walks over to Lapsus and does the same thing. Rax walks over to Shiro, cuts out the arrows from his flesh and heals him.
"There hope he stays like that."
Both Lilium and Lapsus then gets up and looks around.
"uhh..ooh...what happened?... Rax?" Lilium says
"urrgh I feel like I ate your lunch." Lapsus says
"I just paralyzed Shiro for now, and Lapsus don't hate my food."
Lapsus tosses at a Rock at Rax. The rock bounces off Rax's head and he falls over.
"You think eating twigs is not bad!? Whats wrong with you!" Lapsus yells
"What? You could eat anything if your hungry."
Rax heals the scratch on his head and starts making a Rope.

End of Chapter 46
Chapter 47: A Puzzle
Hiroki, Krim , Zoe, and Yasashiku walks up to his huge door with two signs on it.
On the left door a Sign of Thunder and Wind Swirling around is on it. On the right door a Sign of Fire and Water are seen Swirling around it. Hiroki walks up to the door and begins examining the signs.
"Hmmm... Yasashiku I want you to shoot a fireball on the right door."Hiroki Says
The Fire Symbol on the door starts glowing and lights up Brightly."
"Ooooh Good thinking Hiroki!" Zoe says
"Hrmm not a bad Idea..." Krim says
Hiroki opens up a blue book and a blast of water is shot out and hits the Right door.
The Sign of Water starts glowing brightly. Suddenly the Symbol starts spinning around rapidly. Hiroki opens up a Yellow book and a lightning bolt is shot out toward the left door. Nothing happens, the lightning is pulled off to a distant corridor.
"Hmm I guess we need Kiro and Shiro for this door." Yasashiku says
"Hope Lapsus, Lilium and Rax got Shiro back to normal"
But something that all Four of them didn't notice was there were more Symbols on the ground. They began walking into the distant corridor where the Lightning bolt was directed to.

Chapter 48: Typhoon
A Mild Breeze blows through the Sanctuary. One of Hiroki's books, The book of Wind is pulled out from his bag and is flying away.
"HEY!" Hiroki shouts," HELP ME GET MY BOOK!"
Hiroki starts running for his book as he takes one of the side halls.
"Hiroki!~ Come Back here its just a book!" Zoe shouts out while chasing him
Yasashiku starts running and then Krim grabs him by the arm and says,"Ah just leave em, they can find their way back."
"Meh, I say we follow them anyway" Yasashiku says as he starts running after them.
"Bah, They won't listen huh..."
Krim starts following after them too. Meanwhile Rax feels the breeze and sits down to enjoy it.
"Hey wait a minute...we're INSIDE how the hell can there be a breeze..."
Lapsus is thinking about something and Lilium responds,"Hmm Good point, Lets go see where its coming from."
"Alright Ill drag Shiro with us then" Lapsus says as he picks up Shiro.
Hiroki then jumps out and catches his book and rolls into a room, Everyone else behind him.
Hiroki looks up and sees Kiro in a Meditative state.
"Well...Whaddya Know..theres Kiro" Hiroki says
Hiroki moves forward with the book of wind in his hands, but as soon as he does the book is shredded into pieces and The room is sealed.
"HIROKI!? , HIROKI!!!" Zoe Starts yelling.
"ZOE GO FIND ANOTHER WAY INSIDE AND TELL EVERYONE ELSE!"
Kiro opens his eyes, gets up, and draws out his spear.
"AND HURRY KIRO IS ATTACKING!"
Kiro stabs his spear forward toward Hiroki. Then he pulled out a book and uses it to block the spear. The air around the spear then starts spinning and a whirlwind shreads his book. The Air around Kiro then speeds up and Hiroki is picked up and the winds spin around.
"Kiro Stop this at once!"
Kiro doesn't respond and he holds out his spear and spins it around in the same direction as the Wind.
Hiroki pulls out a book and holds it in front of him.
"Im sorry but I must do this."
Hiroki starts chanting a spell, Kiro then starts glowing a green aura.
"The Lord of Knowledge , Help the one who believes in your knowledge, the one who respects it and wants to surpass it, Allow me to borrow your power!" Hiroki shouts out.
Kiro fires out a beam at Hiroki while he's moving. Smoke fills the room and a new power emerges.

end of Chapter 48

Chapter 49: A Wind and A Scholar
The Beam deflects off Hiroki's Book and The Smoke begins to swirl around Hiroki.
Kiro lands back on the ground and his winds stop. Hiroki's book starts glowing a Bright Light.
"I Cannot allow you to cause anymore damage, I will free your soul by taking it!"
Hiroki holds on his hand with his palm facing Kiro. He then holds the book in front of his palm and it starts spinning when he lets go. Kiro gets into a defensive stance and awaits an attack.
"SOUL STEAL!" Hiroki shouts out
A Hook with a Chain attached to it latches onto Kiro, Then the Chain starts to pull something out of Kiro. On the hook there are Two souls attached to it. Hiroki halts it and leaves the book floating in the air. Hiroki walks over to the Two souls and sees a Dark Aura like Soul and a White Aura like Soul.
"Hmmm Looks like something was Controling Kiro but what.."
Hiroki decides to pull out the Dark Aura like Soul and place it into the book. As soon as Hiroki starts it back up a strong wind begins to reswirl around the room. Hiroki runs to the book and keeps it up in the air. The White Soul returns back into Kiro while the Dark Soul is shoved into the book. The book then has chails flowing out from the seams locking the binds of the book.
Suddenly Zoe breaks through the wall and into the room.
"*Gasp* Are-*Gasp* You Alright?" Zoe says
"Yeah Im ok get Yasashiku and Krim in here"
The aura of great knowledge leaves Hiroki, and Zoe says," Yasashiku and Krim went to get Lapsus, Lilium, and Rax"
"Alright help me with Kiro here, He collapsed"

End of chapter 49
Chapter 50: Origins 3, Hiroki
The one who is able to read this book Is a Hero to us all, Wether it is Human or Not,
Exerpt from the false book of Revelations L.
A Young Kid Who was born in a village on the outskirts of the False City.
"Daaaaaaaaad!!!!" Hiroki shouts out
"Whaaaaat!?"
"Take me to the Libary!"
"Your Old enough now you can go by yourself."
"But Im afraid of whats out there."
"Look ever since your mom passed away a year ago I don't have much freetime anymore."
Hiroki sits back down and looks at his feet Sniffling. His dad walks up to home and pulls up a stool and sits next to Hiroki.
"Alright, I'll take you to the Libary soon just put the Twenty Books we borrowed yesterday Into the bag."
"Yaay! I already have them in the bag!" Hiroki says cheerfully.
"I still can't believe you finished TWENTY books in one day."
"Should we Bring Brother and Sister along?"
"Naah... They don't like the Libary."
Hiroki swings the bag over his shoulders and Hiroki and His dad walks out the door.
On their way a Villager was talking to Hiroki's dad, A hero of the village, that a strange Armored man was seen around the village. Hiroki takes time to Patrol after he Escorts Hiroki to the Libary. They reach the Libary and Hiroki runs inside. After an Hour they head back home to see it on Fire.
"What..whats going on!?"
"Brother!"
"Sister!"
"Where are you!!" Hiroki shouts out.
Out of the Flames a Large Armored man appears, he carries Two Large Battle Axes on both hands, it's Soul.
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY CHILDREN!?" The Dad Cries out.
"They needed to be exterminated." Soul says
Hiroki runs and hides behind the next house and takes a peek to see whats going on.
"ILL KILL YOU!!!!"
Hiroki's Dad pulls out a Rapier and Rushes at Soul.Without even trying Soul just stands their letting Hiroki stab him in the arm. Soul then scoffs and he kicks him into the air. Then Soul removes the Rapier from his Arm and places it into the Ground where Hiroki's Dad will land. A minute later, The short battle is over, Hiroki's family is dead. With the books Hiroki borrowed He ran toward the False City. Hiroki never turned back as the village was set Aflame by the Armored Warrior. Hiroki Never knew his name and Forgot the Imaged of Soul, But he still remembers how his Family died.

End of Chapter 50


Yeah yeah im sorry part of the chapter is cut off so im making part 3 on another topic

[Soul]

damn.....very nice chapter

[haprish]

interesting.

[Elk]

I have read chapter 29 and I can now die happy

[Soul]

now i really want to know what happens next...

[Mune]

BWAHAHAHA Im a Clever Writer now you will all cry for the next chapter!
*Kiro Pulls out a Flashlight and shines it on himself
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[David]

err...unholy death? Lol cmon you can come up with better names then that right?

[Mune]

Hey im tired , bored , and hungry when I typed that up

And since I didn't fufil my primary needs I had trouble typing that up

Edit: besides that its just a chant not the skill name

[~Motoko~]

you touched my leg!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

wait.....EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

[Mune]

Chapter 31 is done , Introduction to Krim

[Krim@school]

damn why do i seem so bloody thirsty?, and the way u did it made it look like i did sumthing bad

[Xaris]

Krim killed soul cuz the people voted it so =O

[David]

hey i have a question...umm are everybody's stat sheets overpowered or something? cuz i only have 1 power and i dont have much specialties so i feel kinda plain...

its like
special abilities
combust air.
the rest is bit plain =_=

[Mune]

Mine is a bit plain too so technically both of us has a lack of skills >_>

[Xaris]

i think krims used to being all powerful and cant bear the thought of being weak. as for my character, kiro's weird. his fault.

[Soul]

yes but im the one dead =P

[~Motoko~]

hey i have a question...umm are everybody's stat sheets overpowered or something? cuz i only have 1 power and i dont have much specialties so i feel kinda plain...

its like
special abilities
combust air.
the rest is bit plain =_=

uh....kiro gave me powers.....>_> like that lance and all those attacks. lol. and kiro, if you touch me again, i might have to hurt you. =p

[Elk]

I use books >_> not really a power is it... but i can control trees and what not so im good

[Mune]

*touches motoko's legs and waits for a reaction

Yeah and Krims stat sheet WAS overpowered untill I decheapified it

[Krim@school]

sheeze you people make it sound if im some bloodythrisy demon and kiro never even told be bout the stat sheet till after he posted 31 so wut was i supposed to do?

[haprish]

haha, dont worry Krim i was confused about the stat sheet also....touches Motoko's leg also....waits for reaction...

[Mune]

Chapter 32 is done , I liked this one alot

[haprish]

nice

[Soul]

well im like dead, shoulda just left me there to die =P

[Mune]

Chapter 33 is done too