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Postby Dopemeister » Sun May 14, 2006 12:02 am

The Code of Conduct

Chapter 1: Escape

A familiar clanging of chains awakens Rezek. Since his arrival in prison several weeks ago, Rezek has been under the utmost worst of living conditions. Having betrayed the Dark Lord, Rezek was banished to a remote prison just south of Alberta. There, he was placed in a top security cell, where two Radrics beat him daily. He was questioned of the reason behind his betrayal. Revealing this information would most certainly mean his death, and possibly the destruction of humanity. Rezek knows that this secret will mean the continual punishment of his now frail body, but he also knows it is the lone reason he is still alive. Once the Dark Lord gains this bit of information, he will become more powerful than ever.

Bracing himself for the inevitable whipping, Rezek puts on a layer of Thief Clothes underneath his prison clothing, tucking something in between the two layers. Rezek catches a glimpse of his captors approaching; he notices something is different, although he can’t quite place it – it seems they are accompanied by a third figure – a much larger creature than the others. As they approach, an eerie sound awakens nearby prisoners. The clanging becomes louder… louder. Silence. The cold, dank cell suddenly feels much more foreign; Rezek starts hallucinating. Inhuman screams fill the darkened halls as prisoners everywhere are tortured by his presence. A sudden unmistakable croak snaps Rezek out of his illusion.

A lifeless voice speaks. “Good to see you’re doing well, Rezek.”

“Not quite what you had expected, is it,” replied Rezek, receding.

The figure draws near. “It seems the Raydrics aren’t doing what they’re told; they’ve been treating you quite well from the looks of things. There’s hardly a scratch on you,” the figure says, motioning towards Rezek’s wounds. “I’ll be taking over your punishments from now on, as requested by the Dark One.”

“I will have my revenge,” proclaims Rezek, retreating further towards the rear of his cell.

Nearly at the cell door now, “Foolish child, did you really think you could face an army of Radrics,” questioned the creature, almost laughing. “You fail to notice that most were equipped with bows; even the strongest of Assassins wouldn’t stand a chance against that many Raydric Archers.”

“Langoek could,” Rezek says, trembling slightly. His back was now against the cell wall.

Putting a hand on the cell door, another hand in his pocket, the figure spoke: “Ha! Do you not remember what happened to Langoek,” now laughing hysterically, “that’s right, he’s dead. Why? His foolish betrayal to the Dark One. Play your cards right and you’ll follow his footsteps.”

Langoek was Rezek’s father. When Rezek was young, just a newly declared Thief, his father rose in status and power. He defeated the Gryphon that had long killed their town’s livestock and threatened their children’s safety. Since this defeat, Langoek has gained fame all over Midgard and was eventually hired as an Assassin by the Confederate Forces. There, he continued to show bravery and mastery; he killed swarms of Hunter Flies in an instant. Langoek was the first to master the Meteor Assault, a legendary skill that required one to focus all energy until one could contact the heavens. It obliterated everything within a 20 feet radius. Langoek grew in ranks within the CF; one day, he sought leave from the force to attend to some unknown matter. When Langoek returned, he changed. The Confederates were both amazed and horrified by Langoek’s change; they say he is no longer human. They declared him a hybrid, a cross of humans and demons, an Assassin Cross.

This time, Langoek applies for permanent leave from the Confederates; when the leaders asked him why, he could only reply with “It’s an issue of great importance”. Langoek knew the weapon he yearned for was deep in the desert fields of Morroc, somewhere buried beneath an ancient deserted city. Before he could go on this quest, however, he had to go home to see his family, his son.

When Langoek arrived at Morroc, masses of natives swarmed him. Each brought with them countless tears at their town hero’s arrival. Langoek ignored them all and indifferently asked for the whereabouts of his family. They all gestured towards the lone hut in the heart of the city. Langoek approached the building, his heart pounding. Twelve years, he thought, twelve years. When he arrived at the steps of the hut, he is startled to find the tent empty and deserted.

A voice rang out. “Father! Father!”

Turning around, he sees his son running at him, arms outstretched. Now a well-qualified Assassin, his son was eighteen years of age. Langoek ran at him and hugged Rezek; tears were now streaming out of both of them. Rezek’s mother died when he was four, reportedly to town raid. Langoek clutched and held his only remaining family member. He told Rezek of his experiences in CF, his sudden vision and his leave, and the sacred knowledge he acquired during that leave.

Then suddenly, Langoek pulled something out of his Manteau – a box of some sort. On it were strange inscriptions that Rezek had never seen before. He tucked the object safely into Rezek’s robe, “Open this when the time comes.”

Confused, Rezek replied, “how will I know when?”

“You will know.” And with that, Langoek left, never too be seen again.

Two year later, it was reported that an organization was formed, supposedly by the White Wizard, Hornan. They called themselves the Alliance Force of Resistance and were sworn enemies of the Dark Lord; they lived in secrecy and hope to one day rise up and overthrow Him. They also refuge the majority of the traitors that survived His torment.

Rezek knew that contrary to beliefs, his father was the founder and leader of the AFR, not Hornan. Hornan, more commonly known as X, is known publicly as the leader to protect Langoek identity and his knowledge of the ancient arts. Recently, the discovery of Langoek’s death has caused massive chaos and almost a civil war within AFR. Some members argue that without Langoek to lead them, they will eventually be discovered and murdered one by one. Others, however, believe that the general population requires hope, a small chance at retaliation, despite the fact that odds are greatly against them. It is hope that decides whether or not the human race continues to live, love, and thrive.

Rezek stares directly at the face of his captor. You'd think those who indulge in torturing others would be delighted at the sight of pain, but this creature seems to be cold and calculating… as if he was looking for something.

“You will never get away with this!” Rezek exclaimed, tears now flowing from his shallow, blue eyes.. As his captor opens the jail cell, two objects fall from Rezek’s clothes and into his palms. His eyes spark with a fire and with elf-like reflexes, he lunges forward at his nemesis and delivers two lightning quick jabs. As quickly as the attack came, he falls back. Taking careful aim, he pulls out a Poison Knife and flings it at the creature. He hits the creature’s shoulder.

The creature laughs and plucks the knife with two fingers. “You’ll have to do better than that if you want to stop me.” The next knife catches him squarely between his eyes. The figure howls in pain and agony; the air around him starts to thicken. Mist forms and hinders Rezek’s view. When the fog finally clears, the creature is gone.

For Langoek, Rezek thought.

He turns to face the other two Raydrics. “Come and get me.” The Raydrics drop their weapons and flee immediately. Putting on his two Main Gauches, Rezek escapes. A sudden feeling indulges him: It is time.

Rezek reaches into his clothes and pulls out a familiar mahogany box. He opens it, fully expecting a weapon of unimaginable grandeur, only to find a piece of papyrus. On it were scribbled several strange phrases, arranged perfectly in a square:


Code: Select all
18 –5- 26 -5- 11

To  Beckman  Fi:

Can it yet, Cin?

P.S. Dellik Mary



What the hell does this mean, pondered Rezek. Unable to spare another moment, Rezek races towards the exit and towards freedom.
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Postby Dope » Sun May 14, 2006 12:03 am

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Postby Zidane » Sun May 14, 2006 3:35 am

Very good work. Thats all I can say, I dont see anything wrong.
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Postby Lynn111 » Sun May 14, 2006 4:05 pm

yay!!! something your actually good for =)
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Postby Xaris » Sun May 14, 2006 6:30 pm

I saw a few typos, but I'll let Dope fix them (about three). :) Other than that it's an interesting story. >.> If it's original.
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Postby It's Dope! » Sun May 14, 2006 6:40 pm

Alliterations... I try to reference it when I can (the title...), I even [tried to] follow the formats, but the puzzles are original, I promise. The way to solve 'em is definantly new (no hebrew stuff, etc).

@Xaris: The discrepancy is intentional (one of them anyway).
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Postby Lynn111 » Sun May 14, 2006 6:48 pm

i wanna make a story xD but everytime i do someone makes fun of me =(
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Postby Xaris » Sun May 14, 2006 8:17 pm

Amazing code. ;) <--- That's really a wink.

Doodeedoo. Don't worry Dope, nobody will know.

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Oh, lame saint!
P.S. Find Robert Langdon
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Postby Bunny » Sun May 14, 2006 10:20 pm

Its decent from what I read.

You made this for fun or for a reason of some sort?
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Postby Xaris » Sun May 14, 2006 10:50 pm

It's fiction but he's trying to prove Christianity wrong. Er... nevermind, different story.
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Postby copper » Mon May 15, 2006 6:21 am

Xaris @ May 15 2006, 12:50 PM wrote: It's fiction but he's trying to prove Christianity wrong. Er... nevermind, different story.


Lol, yeah Xaris, that's what I was thinking. For some reason this reminds me of The DaVinci Code (sp?). Maybe if I read it that would change, but I'm waaaay too lazy to read all that.
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Postby It's Dope! » Mon May 15, 2006 7:51 pm

Would you be so kind as to reading my previous post... and I can make it into a parody... if I wanted... I think I will... Anywayyyy, chapter two:



Chapter 2: Avant Feat. Nicole – Lie About Us (good song)

When Rezek reached the front, he thought to himself: the fuck am I running for, fuck that. So he turns around and grabs his thirteen-sided dildo and fucks up the Raydrics. He then stared at the piece of papyrus in front of him: fuck this shit. He Sonic Blows the piece of shit and owns it up, cause like, it was paper and he had a dildo. When he reaches Morroc, he’s like, “Aiite, fuck you guys. Imma own you niggas up, after I trap the Voldemort wanna-be with my Millennium Eye.” And with that, he sets off on his quest to destroy evil. Then Rezek had a pop-up, it said: Do you want to destroy evil? [Yes] [No]. He’s like, why don’t you fucking suck my fucking balls and ctrl-alt-del’d and [End Process Tree]. gg no re kthx noob 1-0.

Rezek then went to heaven ‘cause he felt like it. When he got there, he’s like “where the fuck is dad?” Einstein points to a something and was like “fuck you.” Rezek got ticked off and boned out. He returned with like a thirty foot vibrator and said: “Come and get it you fucking jew.” They both whipped out their penis and since Rezek was black, he had a bigger penis and owned. Rezek told him, “I’m cal-i dumbass” and Einstein was forever banished to Auschwitz with the Mormons. Fuck this, Rezek thought, I’m too fly for this shit. So then he went to hell.

“Bring me Saddam Hussein,” Rezek stated. Beelzebub was like “go fuck yourself.” Next to him stood Thomas Edison, who was saying some shit about Rezek’s mom. Rezek was like, go get some rim jobs you prudes. So, Beelzebub and Edison left to get some rim jobs and were happy. Rezek finally found Saddam; he Enchanted Deadly Poison and owned him up with headshots. Saddam countered by busting out his boner and was like, your mom. Then Saddam’s boner became flaccid, and eventually morphed into like, a female penis. Rezek was like, that’s pretty nasty. Then Saddam died.

Rezek went back to heaven and was like, who the fuck KS’d Saddam? John F. Kennedy was like, your mom KS’d Saddam. Then Kennedy summoned a bunch of Baphomets cause he was like a GM in heaven. Kennedy then was like @kill Rezek, but it was an invalid command cause he was such a noob. Rezek was like, “EXPELLIARMUS!” Kennedy was deGM’d. Rezek then called on Pikachu to own up the level 3 Baphomets. Then Pikachu evolved into Raichu cause rates were 10k/10k/3k. Shakespeare then died cause he was a bisexual.

Rezek was like, lmfao you fucking noob. He took out his awp and owned up Kennedy in the head again. Kennedy forgot to buy armor. He then challenged some faggot cause the faggot was being a faggot. Challenged him to a duel. They both took their colts and turned their backs against each other. The faggot had a royal flush and Rezek had Exodia. Rezek owned.

After pwning hell and heaven, he’s like, time to fuck up Voldemort. On the way, he met Mr. Burns and like stepped on him and Burns died. When he saw Voldemort, he was disgusted cause Voldemort had a 300 year old penis which was all saggy and wrinkly and shit. Then Harry Potter came out and was boning J.K. Rowling, which is fucking sick. Rowling had AIDS so Harry and J.K. both died. Voldemort then died too cause he had genital herpes from being a douche. Rezek then was like, fucking noobs, and boned out.

Rezek met Robert Langdon and Sophie <last name>; they were having sex. He walked up to Langdon and slapped him on the ass really hard. Then he laughed and left. Rezek saw something in the air: a bird? No. A plane? No. Superman? Fuck him. It was Buckbeak. He hopped on his Gryphon which like flew next to Buckbeak. He jumped off of the Gryphon and landed on Buckbeak. He’s like, damage over time bitch, and fucked up Buckbeak.

He saw something out of the corner of his eyes, what was it? It was like creeps. Behind them, following like a pussy, was a Nerubian Assassin. He landed his Gryphon and flanked them. Rezek asked the Nerubian Assassin, do you know who I am? I’m the Juggernaut bitch! Rezek ganked him cause he was such a noob and it pissed him off. Paris Hilton is a prostitute.

Out of nowhere, Cartman fell from the sky and squashed Rezek. Rezek died. He was reborn cause he collected over 100 coins and had a life. He owned Cartman, who was really Kenny, but since he’s trapped inside Cartman’s body, he’s Cartman. In the distant horizon, he could see a huge army. Who were they? No one knows, except me; they’re Samwise Gamgee and Frodo Douchebag. It looked like a huge army cause Samwise is fucking fat, he should go on a diet; seriously, he should call Jenny Craig. Frodo can suck my balls. They were hallucinations, the real enemy, Tassadar and Jim Raynor came from behind and lock downed Rezek. Rezek wasn’t a mechanical unit so he was an invalid target. I clicked on Rezek and he was like, "You remind me of gay." Rezek then ball tapped both of them and they died. Fucking noobs.

The Dark Lord then died cause he was a noob and tried to heal himself, but he was undead. So he pretty much like got owned by healing, what a dumbass.

To be continued…
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Postby Lynn111 » Tue May 16, 2006 7:29 pm

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Postby It's Dope! » Tue May 16, 2006 8:52 pm

I was planning to post the real chapter two but like... fuck it.
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