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Heres some of the false city stuff
False City Chapters 1 - 28 http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... topic=9097
False City Chapters 29 - 50
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... topic=9273
False City Chapters 51 - 68
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... topic=9498
False City Ending Cha[ters
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... f=5&t=9712

Quest Chapters 1 - 19
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... entry94303

Quest Chapters 20 -30
http://www.quantumraiders.com/forum/ind ... entry97037


Quest

Chapter 31: Your a Strange Little One

A Large field is seen ahead, the wind blows gently as the noon sun leaves the feeling of warmth on them. In the Large field tree's surround a lonely cottage, around the cottage and trees carrots are growing in the ground and a few Rabbits hop around. As they approach the cottage A Rabbit hops in front of them and growls.
"Do Rabbits growl?" Alexander asks.
"I don't know but thats kinda scary." Isabella says.
David looks around then looks above him at the tree's a Girl hops down from the tree's and lands on him. Alexander and Isabella turns around and looks at the Girl Sitting on David.
"Visitors?" The girl says.
"Erg..Yeah..Can you get off me?" David grumbles.
"Oh I'm sorry." The Girl hops up
She Invites them inside and everyone looks inside at the odd house. The Walls are painted orange and theres a Book with carrot recipies on the shelf.
"Are you Lilly?" Alexander asks.
"Why Yes I am!" She Cheerfully shouts.
"Do you know this man?" Alexander asks as he lays down Kiro on the Table. His legs hang off the edge of it as Isabella moves it around.
"Ah thats..." Lilly whispers for a moment.
"Nothing, But I do know him!" She exclaims.
"Well heres our problem..." Alexander explains, as he tells the problem they have at the moment,"...and thats that."
"Well I need to collect some Stuff for a moment." She explains,"It's going to take me a few days so you can hang out for a littlebit."
Isabella stays inside and starts Chatting with Lilly as David and Alexander begins to talk.
"She's really...weird." David says.
"I told you she's 'Unique'" Alexander explains.
"I heard that!" Lilly shouts from inside.
"She has sharp hearing too." David whispers as he sees the Rabbit behind Alexander.
"Or she's using that Rabbit behind you and knows every word we're saying."
"Thats creepy David." Alexander says.
"Yeeaah..."
A few days pass and Rabbits come to the cottage dropping off supplies for the potion.
Meanwhile, Neiko, Mirage and Neivlis approaches Iceguard.
"Welcome my friends!" Neivlis Shouts,"This is my Home!" As they exit out of the frozen forest and sees the town, in flames.

End of Chapter 31


Chapter 32: Frozen Will

A Man wearing a Brown cloak, brown hood, and holding a dagger at his side, begins to emerge from the flames. Suddenly Neivlis' Mother leaps out from the smoke trying to attack him with a Knife.
"Mother!" Neivlis cries out, as the Man pulls out the Dagger and stabs her. Blood gushes out as Neivlis' mother falls to the ground while staring at him. "Zarathur!?" Mirage shouts. Zarathur turns his head and looks at them, Neivlis looks at Zarathur, rage burns in his eyes as he starts glowing. As Neivlis raises his staff and slams it on the snow. As the ground rumbles and Spikes rises out flowing forward. The Spikes melt before they even get to Zarathur, as a wave of heat flows out from him. A Beautiful song is heard from Neiko as he plays his flute keeping Everyone, except Zarathur, healed. Mirage leaps toward him and cries out,"Sword Rain!" as He begins to slash many times at lightning fast speeds. Zarathur slides backwards, whispering,"Dagger Inferno.". Each Slash is Countered with a Toss of a Dagger from Zarathur. Mirage stops for a moment and with both of his swords, slits both of his wrists. Blood drips out as he says,"Dragon's Tear.". The blood heals back from Neiko's song and Mirage begins to move quickly. Mirage appears behind Zarathur and hits him with the Hilt of the Ice Sword, Then in front slashing with the Blade of the Fire sword. All of a sudden Zarathur begins to evade each attack as he slashes back without anyharm. Mirage stops as Zarathur does also.
"Why did you do this?" Mirage gasps. Zarathur doesn't say anything as he glares. A Ring of Fire Appears around Mirage and binds into him. Mirage starts screaming from the heat untill, Neivlis shouts,"Ice shield!", Dispelling the bind.
"Get back, I'll get revenge." Neivlis scowls.
Mirage nods as he runs back and Neiko stops playing his song. Zarathur stands there looking at Neivlis, he raises his dagger and spins it around as it glows red. Neivlis breathes deeply as he removes his cape. Dark Energy quickly flows out as the fires burn out. Neivlis suddenly has a dark and evil aura growing out of him as the Cape falls to the ground. Zarathur charges and slashes into Neivlis. As the flames are about to appear, they dissipate just as quickly from Neivlis' power.
"I'll Kill you!" Neivlis booms.
Zarathur quickly moves backwards as he gets into a Defensive Stance. Neivlis slams his Staff down again and Hail, the size of Baseballs, Rise out of the Ground. Zarathur heats himself up melting the Hail but into Large orbs of Water. Neivlis snaps his fingers as Lightning flashes out and Bolts into the Sky. Neivlis then looks at Mirage and Neiko, the same look that he struck Zarathur with. Mirage realizes whats about to happen and begins Running toward Neivlis. The Cape moves closer to Mirage as he picks it up and leaps. Neivlis holds his hand up toward Mirage and about to snap his fingers. Mirage then slides behind him and places the cape back on him. The Dark Energy dissipates as Neivlis begins to regain control of himself. Zarathur lays on the ground, glowing with the Holy Electricity.

End of Chapter 32


Chapter 33: The Blind Swordsman

Zarathur gets back onto his feet as the Electricity flows into the ground. Neivlis' vision dazes as he collapses onto the ground. Mirage keeps on guard while Looking at Neiko.
"Master Neiko, This is the Last time I'll be able to see." Mirage says.
"I don't understand." Neiko replies,"What are you trying to say?"
"Just go and Revive the town, I'll get him."
Zarathur spins his dagger around in his hand, heat begins to flow out from him. Mirage looks down at the snow, he drops the swords into the ground as his eyes begins to glow the same as his swords. Zarathur is finally ready and launches a flaming slash. Mirage Foresees this and slides to the side as he picks up his swords.
"Theres no way you could've dodged that." Zarathur says.
"It's called Dragon's Eye I can see all your going to do next." Mirage shouts.
Zarathur clenches his other fist, The snow melts around him as he dashes around quickly. Zarathur then tries to stab him in the back. As Mirage blocks it and slashes with the Ice blade.
"I'll end this now!" Mirage shouts as his swords change into two dragons of Fire and Ice. Zarathur tries to Evade, but Mirage sends the Dragons in Zarathur's Path which swallows him into the elements.
"Argh.." Mirage groans, as the colors in his eyes turn blank. The dragons shift back into swords, and Mirage falls to his knees. Mirage looks around, but all he sees is darkness and hear's Zarathur's footsteps behind him.
"Can't see? well thats too bad!" Zarathur says.
Mirage swings his Hilt at Zarathur and knocks him into the ground. Mirage then lifts up both of his blades, and swings down. Blood splatters onto the white snow, Zarathur falls onto the ground. Mirage listens for Nevilis' breathing and picks him up as he heads into Neiko's direction
"The Potion is Done" Lily says.
"Alright then lets get Isabella to drink this." Alexander says excitedly.
"Yeah but, All of you need to Know something" She says Grimly.

End of Chapter 33

Chapter 34

"If Isabella drinks this potion, Kiro will be released,But!" Lily then sadly says,"Her Child will die in the process."
Alexander looks at Isabella, while David runs outside panicking. "Whats the Decision Isabella?" Alexander asked.
"I'm sorry Alex I never wanted this child with you." Isabella says, tears begin to drip down from her eyes. Alexander pats her on the back and hugs her.
"It's alright, but ask Kiro first...."

"Who are you?" Kiro asks.
"What are you doing here?" A Voice responds.
"But I'm asking who are you?"
"I'm supposedly the future child of Isabella and...Well I can't tell you."
"How do you know this?"
"You ask too many questions, maybe you should listen outside."
"I already heard but, your the one to be the next Child."
"Yup, But its alright if you leave, even though I'll return from where I came from." The voice says,"You need to return to your body to die and reincarnate like everyone else."
"Brother...."
"I'm not your brother anymore Kiro, I've died long ago and was brought here by a spiritual link."
"I'm sorry, even though mom and dad died afterwards and I couldn't take care of you either."
"I hold no grudges, but fufil your quest and don't lose track."

Isabella holds the potion up and drinks it.
"Kiro, We'll meet again in fourteen years."
"I'll remember that and I hope you will too."
Two bright spheres emerge from Isabella's abdomin, as One of them heads for Kiro's body and the other upward and outside. Isabella runs over to Kiro's body and falls to her knees.
"Kiro!?" She exclaims.
Alexander and Lily stands over Isabella as David runs inside after watching the other sphere. Kiro's eyes open as he blinks and looks at them.
"Good mornin?" Kiro blatantly says.
Isabella starts crying and hugs him tightly."Don't leave me again."
"Welcome Back Kiro." Alexander says.
"Good Morning Big Brother." Lily says
"Big Brother!?" David exclaims.
"He never told you but, back then when the village was under darkness, he threw me and my little brother out saving us." Lily explains.
"Even though we're not related I still call him brother."
"Ah Ah, don't tell them anymore Lily." Kiro says.
Lily looks down at the ground giggling as Isabella cries over Kiro's shoulder.
"Everyone has their own Quest to fufil.." Kiro says,"Mine isn't done yet, if you want to go with me you can."
"I won't leave behind a Friend!" David says.
"I'll go if Isabella goes." Alexander responds.
"Don't Leave me this time Big bro!" Lily Cheers.
"I'll be with you until the end Kiro." Isabella sniffs
Kiro smiles for the first time in a while and says,"Then lets leave tommorrow morning."

"Mirage!" Neiko exclaims.
"Master Neiko, I subdued Zarathur, But unfortunately I can't see anymore..." Mirage whispers
"Im sorry you had to use that skill."
"It's alright young Master, I'm getting old and I didn't want glasses anyway."
"The Town peoples are Revived and pulling out more from under the rubble."
"Is Neivlis alright? I can't tell."
"Yeah..I'll go revive everyone else soon."
"I'll try to bring him back."
Mirage crouches and puts Neivlis down, "Mom...Why did you attack him?" Neivlis whispers.

End of Chapter 34

Interlude: Flight

A Frozen tundra in the north leaves a town burning in flames.
A Lone Cottage in the South revives an old friend.
A Young girl opposite of the Alchemist in the west.
A Lost runaway who wants to be found in the east.
But in the Center, the final encounter will be set.
Once the mysteries are complete, the desitined one will be complete.
Once he's gone the impact of other's will leave his imprint.
Once a Quest to erase darkness, becomes a Quest to become Normal.
But normality isn't always good, disadvantages will be seen.
The final match begins with loved once.
The final match countinues with friends.
The final match ends at the begining.
But remember, Never give up, even if you are lost.

End of Interlude:Flight

Chapter 35: Maybe hes not so bad

Mirage sits down as he Listens for Neiko. In the distance the sounds of a flute echoes throughout the Town as people emerge from the rubble. Zarathur gets up, slightly dazed as he pulls out a notepad and writes in it before running south. Neivlis' mother runs toward him as she crouches down next to him. She looks up at Mirage, who doesn't seem to be moving his eyes anymore. Neiko walks back to where they are resting as Neivlis' temperature seems to be building up.
"I think he has a fever." Neiko analyzes.
"Oh I don't think I can tell." Mirage sarcastically says.
Neivlis' mom picks him up and says,"My son, You've grown a little."
"Your his mother?" Neiko asked.
"Yes, I was the one that allowed him to leave that fateful day."
"Oh I didn't know she was there." Mirage said.
"You can't see?" She asked.
"I used to, not anymore but I'm trying to get used to it."
The High priest appears from around the corner and rushes over to Neivlis' side.
"Who are you?" Neiko asked.
"I'm the High priest who taught Neivlis."
"So thats how Neivlis can fight?" Mirage asked.
"What? He's not supposed to be able to... But nevermind that Let me heal him."
The high priest places his hands on Neivlis' forehead and chants quickly as a cold air flows around him. Neivlis becomes revitalized as his eyes open, his first words were,"Mom?"
Neivlis' mother burst into tears as she cries onto his robe. "Mom, you don't have to cry anymore but I have to leave one more time."
"What?" She asked.
"We have to meet back with our friends." Neivlis whispered.
"How do you know this?"
"I had a revelation when I was knocked out."
"You did it Neivlis, you attained true priesthood!" The High priest exclaimed.
"No I haven't yet father." Neivlis began,"I took off the cloak."
"I suppose meeting back must be your Final test."
"I Suppose so father."
The wind blows quietly as Neivlis gets back up. Neiko also gets back up but Mirage doesn't move.
"Mirage?" Neiko asked.
"Neiko, you know I can't see right?"
Mirage's eyes are left with a grey blank space. The high priest walks over to him and asks,"Would you like me to heal you?"
"No Father, I feel better not seeing the darkness." Mirage said as he got up onto his feet.
"Alright if thats your wish."
Neivlis checks his robes and pulls out his Golden Apple.
"You still haven't used that?" Neivlis' mother asked.
"There's a time for everything, But we're heading back south."
"Before you say it, We don't need more Supplies." Mirage explained.
"Alright, Farewell then my Little boy!"
They began walking back toward the Icy forest as the towns people investigate the ruins of their town. On the outskirts Zarathur meets up with them, He holds up his hands for a sign of peace.
"You guys are worthy, I feel like coming along." He says.
"I don't trust him." Neiko worrily says.
"Then how about I just keep a distance away."
"Fine but I know if you get to close." Mirage says,"I can hear you."

End of Chapter 35


Chapter 36: Runaway of the East

Blood sprays onto the ground, A Beautiful Woman holding up a heavy lance in her hands stands ontop an Orc corpse.
"Whose next!?" she Challenged.
Another Orc appears, but this one appears to be diffrent. This orc is wearing a robe and a hood, in it's hands is a very large book. Indistinct words are spoken slowly as the Woman looks at it. She finally realizes whats about to happen as she runs away.
A Ball of Swirling energy slowly begins to appear, the grass picked up by the immense energies. She turns around sliding backwards, Lance in hand and ready to defend. The Swirling energy is then shot out as Grass is picked up behind it leaving a trail. She throws her lance into the energy, it pierces through and into the Orc's torso. The Swirling Ball dissipates from the lance as it absorbs it. She walks over to the Orc and pulls out her Lance. She looks at her clothes, blood stains on her Tunic and her long pants. The sun begins to set also, and her stomach begins to growl. "I should set up camp quickly." She thought as she checked her compass and map. On the map to the west theres a town called,"Steelhenge". At the current rate it'll take her about two days, along the way there's also a Lake. She decides to head toward the Lake to clean herself up.

"Master Neiko, How long has it been since we left?" Mirage asked.
"So much has happened, but I'm guessing seven months." Neiko answered.
Neivlis looks up into the clouds, while Zarathur follows behind at a "safe" distance. The snow on the tree's begin to fade as they move farther southeast. "I'm starting to feel a little uncomfortable." Neivlis noted.
"You'll be fine, you were when we were in Steelhenge."
"But I fainted that time."
"Ah, don't worry to much." Mirage comforted.
"The sun is setting." Zarathur shouted.
"We can see that." Mirage says sarcastically.
"Let's set up camp here." Neiko directed as they approached a clearing in the forest.
"One of us should stand guard." Neivlis suggested.
"I'll do it, I don't sleep much anyway." Zarathur says.
Neiko and Neivlis Agrees but Mirage disapproves.
"I still don't trust him." Mirage noted,"Remeber he tried to Kill us and our friends, twice."
"Fine then you can stay up also Mirage."
Mirage nods as everyone begins to set up camp.

The Woman walks onto the edge of the lake, she dips her foot into it to check the temperature.
"Ah this is good." She thought.
She takes off her clothes with her undergarments still on. She begins to wash them gently as the Blood stains flow out. Suddenly she stops, her ears move a little as she looks up at the setting sun. "Neiko?" She pondered.
Meanwhile Neiko perks up for a moment as he also looks at the setting sun."Kali..."
Kali stops looking at the sun as she hangs her clothes onto a nearby branch, she takes off her underwear and begins to bathe in the clean water. "It's been seven months since I left my home..." Kali thought to herself. "I hope Neiko has a good life so far, Not needing to worry about me."
"My parents don't have enough time for me neither."
Kali sighs as the Moon rises over the trees, and a lone Cat walks on the branches.

End of Chapter 36


Chapter 37: What you came back?

West of Lily's Cottage lies a 'Special' Town. What makes this town so special is the fact that people who use alchemy are only born there. David was outcasted from this place, Alteveran the Alchemy town. Alchemy is what revolves around the town, it's how work is done and new Abilities are discovered.
"I never thought I would return here." David Muttered.
As they approach closer to the town a Sign appears in front of them, it states,"Welcome to Alteveran!". As they enter the town David looks down at the ground as they walk. The Towns people stares at David as they make their way to the town Square. There a Tall man, holding a sword with a transmutation circle engraved on it.
"I Will now Demonstrate a New Technique!" The Man Shouted.
He holds the sword above him as it shifts around as diffrent objects and weaponry. The engravement is always somewhere on the object he transmutes. Adults and Children alike are clapping untill the Man looks Around, and notices David.
"You!" He Boomed.
"Oh man..." David whispered.
"We told you that we Expelled you from this town!"
"Lucian..." David began,"I told you it was an Accident!"
Lucian was Chika's older brother, Chika was Lucian's only family he had left.
"Get your face out of my sight, you bastard." Lucian directed as he pointed toward the Entrance.
"Hey leave him alone." Alexander asserted.
"You want to stand up for the 'Child' who lost my only sister!?" Lucian boomed.
"I don't know what's going on but if it's an accident then leave it at that."
Lucian walks up into David's face with the Sword in his hand. Lily, Kiro, and Isabella back away for a moment.
"If your that pissed off at me, then why don't you kill me here and now?" David Grunts. Lucian grins, his sword is raised before him. David closes his eyes and stands there, ready to be slashed.
"Enough!" a Voice interrupted.
"Metsuta?" David asked.
"Yeah it's me your dad, Next time call me like father or something." Metsuta answered.
"Lucian, Don't kill him it's been atleast seven years." Metsuta estimated.
"But, Chika is Dead Metsuta!" Lucian directed.
"You hold grudges too long, I should be the one to Kill him."Metsuta started," But I won't, because with alchemy we can always bring someone back..."
Lucian spits onto the ground as he glares at Metsuta and walks away. The crowd looks at David with anger as they disperse also.
"My son, I hope you can stop his rage." David looks at the ground ignoring Metsuta as he walks away.
"Are you guys his friends?" Metsuta Asked.
"Yeah, I'm Kiro."
"My name is Isabella, Nice to meet you."
"I'm Lily, How are you?"
"And my name is Alexander."
"Nice to meet you all, I hope you can keep my Son in line..."
"What happened?" Isabella asked.
"Where to begin..." Metsuta began.

End of Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Past of the Damned

"As he was a child..." Metsuta Began,"He loved alchemy."
A Young boy runs around his Father holding up small creations. The Father Praises him for his work, as the young boy runs off to study some more.
"Lucian and his younger sister, Chika, Lived with him."
"Hey we saw a Chika in Steelhenge." Kiro interrupted,"But it was a doppleganger using his David's memories."
"Ah, well Chika and David grew up studying alchemy."
A Young girl and boy runs about a basement trying out their own experiments.
"Both we're learning how to heal people, untill I knew that David was trying to insist an experiment."
The young boy runs to the young girl and whispers into her ear. She nods her head as they rush inside his house.
"The Experiment was to create the Alchemy circle to Destroy."
Both children stand in a basement, a large Circle on the ground. Many complex Symbols and Arrays lay there.
"But when they both tried to destroy a Table, Chika was the one who paid the price."
Metsuta looks down at the ground then looks back up toward the sky.
"Sometimes I think David was lieing to me, but ever since that day he swore he won't use alchemy in this town."
"Why didn't he fight back against Lucian?" Lily asked.
"First let me tell you something else." Metsuta said
"David, practiced the arts of Necromancy after Chika died, even though everyone shunned it and I didn't stop him."
"He became proficient in it, and succeded into the point where he can combine both his alchemist skills and Necromancy magic."
"But because of that his abilities were still uncontrolled."
"When Lucian challenged David to a duel." Metsuta sighed," That's when he almost ripped out Lucian's soul completely."
"It took our priest to sacrafice himself, to return Lucian's soul."
Metsuta breathes in deeply as he wheezes lightly.
"I'm getting old, I never stopped my son but I tried to get him onto the right path."
"He never fights here, never uses alchemy here, Too many problems he's being blamed for."
David returns after Metsuta finished, Both of them stare at each other for a moment. Metsuta begins walking to the Western edge of town.
"I know he told you the story." David said.
"That's a pretty horrible past." Isabella responded.
"But, We weren't making a Destruction Alchemy Circle."

End of Chapter 38

Chapter 39: The Mind of David

As David bids farewell to his friends and heads to his old home. His father is sitting near the fireplace looking at him.
"What dad?"
"Your room," he began"I never moved anything, But I cleaned the dust."
David opens up the door, it creaks with age. The floorboards squeak as he walks over his old bed. He picks up the sheets and waves it around in the air to shake the dust off. He folds the blanket back onto the bed as he opens the window. The lamp next to his bed burning brightly, as the wind flows into his room. David walks back over to his bed and slides into the sheets falling into a deep sleep. The night goes on as the moon rises into the sky. A voice echoes through David's head.
"Why Did you kill me?" A Voice echoes.
"What?" David says,"Chika?"
"Why did you kill me?"
"It Was an accident!"
"Why did you make my brother sad?"
"Because I lost you."
"Do you miss me?"
"Yes...."
"Why do you feel this way?" The voice asked,"Do you regret?"
"I don't know why I feel this way."
"Why did you take up necromancy, I thought we promised to use light alchemy."
"I wanted to bring you back using the dark arts."
"But why the dark arts?"
"Because it's the easiest to use."
"But do you think it's the worst?"
"No...not really."
"Do you think Kiro is your enemy?"
"No"
"But he can purify, if he purified you with full force would you die?"
"I don't know."
"What if he was your enemy?"
"I would kill him."
"What if Isabella was your enemy?"
"I would kill her."
"What if Alexander was your enemy as well?"
"I would slaughter him."
"Why slaughter him if you'd kill the other two?"
"Why are you asking me these questions?"
"Because I am still alive David."
"No you aren't, you can't communicate with me!"
"But the dead can."
"No!" David cries out,"I'll bring you back to life!"
"Right now?"
"Yes, I'll use...Your brother!"
"That's horrible."
"But is it?"
"David, I will be returning on the day of my birth."
"Why are you telling me this?"
"Because I want you to be happy again" The voice says.
"I am Happy!" David shouts.
"But are you?"
"I have friends,I don't think they are my enemy, I cherish them."
"Will you cherish me when I return?"
"I will."
David wakes up and looks around his room, the moonshines in from the night sky. He sighs with relief as he begins to think, how to bring Chika back. He gets up from his comfy bed and into a chair. On the table next to him he brings out a sheet of parchment and a feather with ink. The plans and ingrediants to bring back Chika are listed through the night.

End of Chapter 39

Chapter 40: The Mind of Alexander

Alexander waves to Isabella, Kiro, and Lily as he enter's his Inn room. The warm room makes him feel at home as he jumps onto the bed. He lays there looking up at the ceiling falling into a deep sleep.
The room begins to spin around as darkness surrounds him. Alexander gets up and looks to his right, nothing. He then looks in front of him and to his left, nothing. A Light shines behind him as he turns around. The Light appears to be fading as he begins running toward it. Suddenly walls emerge on his left and right. Limestone tiles appear under his feet as torches appear every few feet in front of him, An endless hall.
He begins running forward, after a while windows begins to appear in place of the torches. A Full moon is outside, and the moonlight shines into the hall within each window. He runs past a window and he begins changing slowly, into his wolf form. Finally he passes the last window and into a large field. The Moon high in the sky shining brightly among him. The moist grass underhis paws and crickets chirping around him. In front of him is someone in a black robe, tearing apart flowers.
He sprints toward her, suddenly the person gets up and Isabella appears. He stops in his tracks and looks up at her, Isabella pulls out a sword and wields it in front of Alexander in fear.
"Isabella?" Alexander says,"It's me Alexander!"
Isabella shakes with fear as she moves backwards slowly.
"Get back you animal!" Isabella cries out.
"Isabella, It's me!"
She swings her sword at Alexander knocking him into the ground, his front left leg chopped off. Bleeding and wounded Isabella begins running away as Alexander looks at her.
"Why did she do that.."
Alexander wakes up suddenly as he rolls off his bed. He looks out the window and the sun begins to rise.
"What was that dream..." Alexander thought.

End of Chapter 40


Chapter 41: Fogged Mind

David walks out of his house, a sheet of parchment hanging out of his pockets. He heads toward the Town square where everyone is already waiting for him.
"Morning David, ready to go?" Kiro asked.
"Not yet, but I need Isabella to come with me for just a moment." David says.
"I don't want to go unless Kiro goes." Isabella mutters.
"Then Lily can you come with me for a moment?"
"Oh alright I want to see what it is." Lily happily says.
"I don't know..." Alexander says,"Something tells me that's a bad Idea."
David and Lily walks to the back of his house, where on the ground theres an alchemy circle.
"Alright Lily just stand right There." David directed.
"Right here?" Lily asked
"Yeah right there."
Kiro, Alexander and Isabella follow behind them and watches David and Lily.
David clasps his hands and is about slam his hands onto the alchemy circle.
"Ayndr, namayca ouin bufan uhdu so ahaseac! Quake!"
The ground shakes, the Alchemy circle brakes apart and David is thrown backwards.
"What are you doing David!?" Kiro shouted.
"I Will bring back Chika.." David says grimly.
"But your not going to use Lily or Isabella!" Alexander protested.
"Alright.. looks like I'll have to do it that hard way."
Alexdander lunges, picks up Lily and runs back as Kiro pulls out his staff.
"I'll get rid of the Darkness in your heart!"
"What Darkness?"
Kiro slams down his staff, spikes rise up from the ground. David side steps it clasps his hands and touches the Spikes, A giant sword appears as he holds it above him.
"Kiro, your my enemy now.. and so is everyone else."
David swings the sword, Kiro holds it back with his staff.
"David, There are other ways!"
"No there isn't this is the only way!"
Kiro parrys the Sword and he runs forward quickly. "Mekrd Binevo drec tyngahat cuim! Purification!" A Bright light explodes throughout the town. David lays on the ground, an aura of light surrounds him as he shivers.
"Maybe I over did it."

End of Chapter 41

[haprish]

OKish chapter.

[~Motoko~]

Woah!

[Elk]

Not a flaming town.

wait...a flaming town... did this happen before?

[Soul]

yay for flames

[Bunny]

You scare me....Sowweh but no offense O_o And lol sorry David.

Oh and ya kinda spelled recipes wrong...

[Edge]

Oh and ya kninda speleld recipes wrong...

hahah...

[Bunny]

*Kinda spelled recipes wrong....

HAPPY?!?!?

(bishie...*big doodoo head...*)

[Mune]

Im still braindead, I had a chemistry test, and I have an Algebra 2 test tommorrow too, so Don't expect a chapter tommorrow

[David]

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH BUNNY D=...hey did she sit on my face or my head or my back or w/e? cuz if it was face i wouldnt mind that much.

[Bunny]

Or in your arms probelly?

o_o wait a minute...That wouldn't be it!

*I just died in your arms tonight!" nawt...

[David]

hmm i dont want anyone dying in my arms >_> that makes me wanna squish them until they come back alive again.....

Or ill just add a random female soul into that body and save it for some special uses.

[haprish]

hmm i dont want anyone dying in my arms >_> that makes me wanna squish them until they come back alive again.....

Or ill just add a random female soul into that body and save it for some special uses.

HA, HA, Dangly Parts

[~Motoko~]

hmm i dont want anyone dying in my arms >_> that makes me wanna squish them until they come back alive again.....

Or ill just add a random female soul into that body and save it for some special uses.

you are so wrong david.... -.-

[David]

hmm i dont want anyone dying in my arms >_> that makes me wanna squish them until they come back alive again.....

Or ill just add a random female soul into that body and save it for some special uses.

you are so wrong david.... -.-

Arn't I?

[Mune]

oookay to clear that up.....
Lilly lands on David's back, so no disgusting thoughts...Cause David is soundin like those child predators right about now

[David]

In the dark alley way of a random city stands a very dark figure looking out with two gleaming eyes......

"Hey...little girl, i'll give you candy if you come with me"

"huh? EEEEEEEEEK"

the little girl's scream alerted the police officers whom just happen to be right next door getting some cuppucino and donuts, their ears perked up and ran straight out of the shop with the donuts still in hand and into the direction of the scream.

"THERE HE IS THE CHILD PREDATOR"
one officer shouts, but was cut short by a sudden kick in the nuts

"CALLING FOR BACK UP UNIT 147 CALLING FOR BACK UP OFFICER DOWN"

david ran for his life with the little girl in one arm and then suddenly, a dozen police tricycles were trailing him. David ran as far as he could, but he was still no match for the never tired police officers who rode the tricycles that is tagged with NYPD on the side.


Yep that's the story.

[Mune]

New Chapter!

Neivlis Pwnzors

[Xaris]

New Chapter!

Neivlis Pwnzors

I sure do.
Er... I mean Neivlis sure does. Great chapter Kiro.

[haprish]

David....

[David]

>_> everything is holy cept for me isn't it? >_> Holy electricity i would love to have some of those, hopefully it'll reverse the electricity usage.


o also try avoid using "As" too much ya know? kinda strange when it keeps saying as as as.


try something like, As he slashes at the enemy, the enemy dodged away keeping his momentum slashes back or like

Slashes at the enemy, but the enemy avoided that attack and attacks back.

or As he puts his sword into the ground and shouted LIGHTING ROD, the enemy puts his bostaff into the ground and shouts reflect ya know?

[Mune]

I realize that, Im still improving, , As you can see.
Also As you can see Its a problem.

Besides that, I'm still learning a bit myself. But thanks for trying to help >_>

[Elk]

[Mune]

Oh and also the story is halfway done, Im going to start a new one when it ends. Elk knows the Title

And Each character will be getting their "Final" skills. Elk think's his is badass

[David]

I realize that, Im still improving, , As you can see.
Also As you can see Its a problem.

Besides that, I'm still learning a bit myself. But thanks for trying to help >_>

im not helping =) just suggesting. (i hate the word "help")

anyway if elk's flute dont shoot bullets then his isnt badass.