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[Lynn111]

Chapter One
The Time To Escape

Lynn was eight when it happened, her parents and her baby brother where killed in a fire, and she
was sent off to an orphanage. In those times, people were scared of children who survived fires,
they thought she was cursed, so fo course nobody wanted to adopt her. All of the other kids stayed
away from her and the masters of the orphanage whipped her when she talked this happened for six more
years until she became 14. Now she has a few friends who would want her to escape.
"It is time..." said Celestine.
"Right, and im the queen of Prontera," said Seth
Lynn walked in, "Guys!!!! The crusaders have busted down the gates... they thought what the
orphanage was doing was wrong and they wanted to free us."
"Told you," said Celestine
"Well, what we waiting for? Lets go!" said Lynn with her pet poring, Plushie, trailing behind her
"Aren't we forgetting something?" Said Seth.
"Yeah forgetting to run!!!" Said Lynn, she picked up plushie and ran.
They made it to the Church of Prontera, Celestine needed to pray, it was her job as a acolyte. She got
up, and kissed the cross she wore around her neck.
"C'mon slowpoke!!! Lets go," said Plushie
Everyone's jaw dropped, Lynn was trying to get him to skpeak for six months and he finaly talked.
"Like its a big deal," he said.
"Well, Lynn, he is right... we are being a bit slow! Lets go!" said Seth
Lynn and Celestine nodded. They started running toward the exit of prontera, when a mob of zombies
appeared.
"Easy," said all four of them.
"Soul Strike!!!"
"Bash!!!"
"Heal!!!"
"Booing!!!"
All fo the zombies were dead, and this time for real.
"Come on no time to waste!" Said Seth.
They got to the gates, no gaurds were there, so they just went through. When they got through the
other side, they saw a Bard and a Dancer singing and dancing.
"Ohhh, thats a beautiful tune," said Lynn.
"Not bad," Celestine mumbled.
"Wow, your pretty," said Seth, his eyes sparkling, then he blushed, Celestine Smacked him.
Plushie started dancing around them, joining him were pekopekos, martins, and more pourings
dancing around them.
All the sudden the bard and dancer realized they were being watched.
"Ahhh! Don't tell anyone we have been here, please!" said the dancer.
"Okay," said Lynn
"Oh, thank you! My names Juliet, and this is Romeo," said Juliet
Romeo waved
"Hi," Seth managed to say
"Take this as a token of our appreciation," said Juliet handing them a bag of Zenny
"Wow, Thanks," said Lynn.
"Well we better get going," said Celestine, "Bye."
"Bye," said Romeo and Juliet.
They walked for half an hour, when they could see the gates of Islude. Seth needed to go there for
more training.
"Once we get past the gates of Islude," said Celestine, "We are free."
"Yay!!!" said Lynn, dancing with Plushie.
Once they got past the gates, They found themselves very tired.
"I guess we should find an inn," said seth
They found an inn and slept like logs.

[copper]

Very fast paced o.o;

and jebus their strong xD

lol, anyways, keep it up, and watch out for those spelling errors...they will eat your...pie! er, soul...right, soul...

[CrimsonBlade]

great more parents died while their children were young

[copper]

i know, really, what's up with that <.<

[kirkryan]

its cuz those kinda writters had issues with thier parents or something

[haprish]

I had my parents die in my story because both my parents were pissing me off.

[Lynn111]

well, she had to escape from something xD, ah theyr not strong, they were rly scared they would run into ghouls o.O

[copper]

I usually just totally omit parents or vaguely aknowledge their existance in my stories.

[Xaris]

So, the crusaders attacked the orphanage, and they end up running from... zombies? Then they get some money because random people didn't want to be found? Good story, but it seems to me it's as random as FF1.

[David]

lol very fast paced xD and i agree with xaris as random as FF1.

[Lynn111]

im random o.O and they arent strangers xD you maybe heard them in a play? xD ill make it a little slower =P and sorry for spelling izlude wrong XD

[Zidane]

I have a theory, THAT HER BABY BROTHER SURVIVED THE FIRE AND WILL COME BACK TO KILL HER!

[Lynn111]

lol omg i was writing he survived b4 i knew you posted that o.O but hes not going to kill her =).

Chapter Two
Lynn's Little Brother

Lynn woke up first, she had a dream about her parents and her little brother, her father had just
become a sage, and her mother was on her way to being a wizard. They were in The Prontera Park, with
purings and drops all around them. Lynn was keeping Plushie's egg warm, he hatched then and started
wondering off and she followed him. Her parents looked for her and then they went home, and that was
when the fire happened.
She went to the balcony and stood there, thinking, why didnt she die with them? Why did Odin spare
her? What was she good for? After all, she was an escaped orphan, outcasted by the outcasts.
Celestine woke up, seeing Lynn crying she went to see if she could comfort her.
"There there, it wasn't your fault," said Celestine.
"I just need to be alone right now," said Lynn, she wiped the tears from her eyes, got dressed, and
went downstairs.
"Jeez, thinking about her parents again?" Asked Seth.
"Yeah, poor girl, shes been through alot," said Celestine.
Seth crossed his arms, "Since when are you sympethetic?"
Celesting rolled her eyes, "You don't get it."
They looked for Lynn and Plushie and after a while they gave up, Celestine took the zenny they got
to buy some food and supplies, so Seth was left there in the underpopulated city of Izlude.
"What to do, what to do?" Said Seth, pacing, "Might as well go train."
He went outside and found a pack of rockers, he provoked them one by one and killed them, taking a
lunch break and observing his surroundings, he saw Lynn in the distance, feeding pourings with jelopy.
Then he saw Plushie bouncing and running toward him.
"I knew it was you Seth!!!" said Plushie, "C'mon, lets go see Lynn. They walked towards Lynn, when
Celesting popped up.
"Shhh, this way," She said.
They followed her until they came to a clearing. There was a small boy there, about nine, had a scar
above his eye.
"He sais he knows Lynn, and he does kind of look like her," said Celestine
"Whats your name?" Asked Seth.
"I don't know, but people call me Aristocrar for my merchanting skills." said Aristocrat.
"Well lets take you to Lynn," said Plushie.
They ran to Lynn and they saw a monk talking to her. He saw them, waved, and then left.
"Hey Lynn," said Seth, "someone wants to see you."
She seemed in a better mood, but when she saw the little boy, her blue eyes got even bluer.
"Chase...?" She asked, "No, you can't be him, hes dead."
"Well, turns out he survived." said the monk, walking up.
"You mean--," said Lynn
"Yes, hes your little brother." Interrupted the monk.
"Chase!!!" She ran up and hugged him, stroking his hair.
She kissed him on the forhead, "I knew it was you when i saw your scar. That was a funny incedent you
know," she laughed remembering it.
"Oh, Lets get you to the Inn," Said Lynn.
"Great, another mouth to feed and another bed to be brought up," grumbled Celestine, Seth nudged her.

[Rikku]

eh? what happened ??

[kirkryan]

eh? what happened ??

[David]

o god rikku is still around, surprising!

anyway lol lynn ur still kind of speedy on ur fic >_> the day kinda passes very fast with a few simple movements of a person, but its pretty good overall i guess, i think i should do a fanfic or something istead of drawing pictures.....

o and also skip a line for every sentence you type xD so it slike

she wanted to eat the chicken but she could not.

the man was blocking her with his fork that shined so brightly, mockingly took the chicken and stuffed it down his throat.

that is when she got mad and took a knife and slit the man's throat and let the blood seep out like honey dripping from a spoon.

there xD the skip lines makes it easier to read.

[Rikku]

o god rikku is still around, surprising!

anyway lol lynn ur still kind of speedy on ur fic >_> the day kinda passes very fast with a few simple movements of a person, but its pretty good overall i guess, i think i should do a fanfic or something istead of drawing pictures.....

o and also skip a line for every sentence you type xD so it slike

she wanted to eat the chicken but she could not.

the man was blocking her with his fork that shined so brightly, mockingly took the chicken and stuffed it down his throat.

that is when she got mad and took a knife and slit the man's throat and let the blood seep out like honey dripping from a spoon.

there xD the skip lines makes it easier to read.

T___T too bloody T________T

[David]

yeah maybe i shoudl make my suggestions less graphical >_>

[Rikku]

yep yep xD at least it wasnt a pervy one -patpat- xD

[David]

Huhuhuhuhu or WAS IT
xD jk