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by **Mune** » Mon May 15, 2006 8:17 pm

Heres a Story I did for english, its about 2 pages long.
So tell me what you think

by **haprish** » Mon May 15, 2006 8:37 pm

good story, but a few facts wrong.

by **Mune** » Mon May 15, 2006 8:40 pm

But I was using primary resources!

by **David** » Mon May 15, 2006 8:41 pm

im gonna give u some holocaust victim/aftermath/genocide/stories.

by **DoubtlessOne** » Tue May 16, 2006 1:48 pm

if this was meant to be an essay... redo it
if this was meant to be a story... quote all your errors
if this was a rough draft... revise

not a bad story, however, it's very fictional, a few found errors, grammatical misusage.
consider revising.. because my english would be evil enough to burn even the best of someone's work

by **Mune** » Tue May 16, 2006 4:10 pm

eh its a roughdraft I fixed it up before I printed it afterwards

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